Page Layout Feedback

Contents Page 1)

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“I prefer the first contents page because I think the background is more interesting. Its important to have a good background rather than a boring one” - Ed

“I like contents page number one because the features column ison the left so it looks like a real magazine page” - Rachel

“The first contents page is better because it is simpler, I don’t like all the images bunched together on the second one” - Emma

“I don’t really like the backgrounds on either of them becauseI don’t think they are interesting enough, sorry” - Charlotte

Front Cover1)

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“I really like the first front over, I think the full body shot works really wellWith the broken wall behind and its really edgy” - Ed

“I like the first and second layouts for the front cover but I’m not very keenOn the third, I think its too dark for a front cover” - Rachel

“I definitely like the first front cover I think it really sums up what your magazine is all about, the other photographs are nice but I don’t think they work as well” - Emma

“The first one for sure! Its really different and cool” - Charlotte

Double Page Spread

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“This is a difficult one! I really like them both andI think you should find a way of using both of the Images” - Ed

“The first one is the best, the photograph willFrame the text better and you can see more of theArtist because it is a close up” - Rachel

“I like the photograph more than the first but I think the article will look better if youUse the first image” - Emma

“Love them both but I think you should use theFirst one because the wall and t-shirt and stuffMakes him look more realistic as a new artist!”- Charlotte

Conclusion

From my audience feedback I have learnt that it is incredibly Important to match the photograph with the article that you are Going to apply it to. This is why I have decided to use thephotographs that my audience liked best and develop the pagesfurther.I will create much more sophisticated designs than the onesshown on the page layouts and I hope that my target audience willEnjoy giving me feedback at a later date when I can show them more!