Screenplay Coverage Report

Title: Climbing Kilimanjaro

Author: Nuru MwasampetaDate: 2/03/2015

Read by: Vivien ObellePage Length: 10pages

Genre: DocumentaryTime Period: 10mins

Budget: 1000Rating: Good

Logline: A man whose dream is to get to the top of Kilimanjaro mountain despite the challenges he would face.

ExcellentGoodFairPoor

Concept/OriginalityExcellent

Plot/StorylineExcellent

CharactersExcellent

DialogueGood

StructureGood

Cinematic ValueGood

RecommendConsiderPass

ScriptRecommend

WriterRecommend

Overall: (A Short paragraph with overall impressions to include strengths and weaknesses)

Jeremy has focus and has made up his mind to get to the mountain top of which he did, Despite the challenges he faced when climbing to the top of the mountain like puking, fainting and other sicknesses.

Synopsis: (No more than a paragraph breaking down the screenplay from beginning, middle, and End).

At the beginning of the screen play, Jeremy embarked on a flight trip to Tanzania for a tour at Kilimanjaro mountain. He encountered a lot of challenges while climbing the mountain such as pains, tiredness and continuous fainting. In the end he made it to the top with the encouragement and help form the tour guide.

Specific Comments: A few sentences on each of the following topics:

Concept/Originality

The writer has an interesting idea, which was developed into a script by leaving the viewers with a lesson to be determined in whatever one does. Jeremy was determined that was why he got to the mountain top despite the struggle he surfaced.

Plot/Storyline

Jeremy encountered a lot of challenges when climbing the mountain but did not give up, he made sure he fulfilled his dreams.

Characters

The main character was determined in making it to the top of the mountain which he did eventually despite the challenges he faced.

Dialogue

There was a good connection in the dialogue which made sense.

Structure

The script is well structured using the Celtx software produced an organized script.

Cinematic Value

The script has a cinematic value, it can be shot and would be interesting to watch by the viewers due to the challenges Jeremy encountered when climbing the Kilimanjaro mountain

Any Formatting Comments: The writer used the Celtx software which was made easy to read.

Final Comments: The writer came up with an interesting idea for a Documentary which could be filmed.

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