second draft of l&l

8/13/2019 Second Draft of L&L

1/67

Locke & Loaded

By Owen O'Neill

Second Draft

January 2, 2014


2/67

E!" #$!% S!EE!S N$()!

* few e+tali+-in. +-ot+ of a /uiet +treet durin. t-e ni.-t tie to

create a cal ato+-ere" * an aear+ +eedin. down t-e +ide of a

road" !-e an +were+ around turn+, ullin. off +oe rat-er ille.al

aneuer+"

!-e an ull+ into a drieway of a -ou+e wit- all of t-e li.-t+ off"

!wo en e3it t-e an and knock on t-e door" !-e door oen+ and t-e

two en enter"

*n unarked olice car i+ +ittin. acro++ t-e +treet" $n t-e drier'+

+eat +it+ Locke, a +ea+oned eteran on t-e force only a few day+ away

fro retireent" )e'+ +een +oe +-it, an" )e i+ roed u wit- a

air of inocular+ onitorin. t-e -ou+e"

LO#E

i.-t on tie"

Locke reac-e+ for -i+ walkie talkie"

LO#E

!-i+ i+ Detectie #on+tale Officer Locke"

!-e ea.le -a+ landed in it'+ ne+t and i+

now feedin. t-e -atc-lin.+ fro it'+

o+o"

D$S5*!#)E

Say a.ain6 But in En.li+- t-i+ tie,

Locke"

LO#E

!-e dru. ule+ are aout to tran+ort

a lot of cocaine"

D$S5*!#)E

o.er t-at"

!-e four en eer.e fro t-e -ou+e carryin. crate+ and are lacin.

t-e in t-e ack of t-e an" One of t-e en li.-t+ u a 7oint of

ari7uana"

LO#E

$' oin. in"

LO#E .et+ out of -i+ car and e.in+ to walk oer to t-e an acro++


3/67

t-e +treet" !-e en ay no attention" *+ LO#E aroac-e+ t-e an

+okin. t-e 7oint, -e ull+ out -i+ ad.e"

LO#E

5olice8 Dro t-at ari7uana ci.arette8

!)9(

:+arca+tically; O- no, t-e olice"

Eeryone run" !-e +cary olice an

i+ confi+catin. y ari7uana"

!-e .rou of !)9(S lau.-"

!)9(:cont'd;

(et out of -ere if you know w-at'+ .ood

for ya"

LO#Euck off, i."

LO#E let+ out a +all lau.- and .rin+ aniacally"

LO#E

Oink" Oink"

LO#E fli+ oer t-e -ood of t-e car and e.in+ firin. at t-e !)9(S"

Oenin. credit+ +tart to roll"


4/67

?LO#E & LO*DED?

END +cene"

L&L

S#ENE 2

O>>$#E !ENS$ON

$N!" 5olice Office @ornin.

* co i+ ourin. -i+elf a cu of coffee w-en LO#E walk+ to t-e

frid.e ne3t to -i" !-e co i+ wowed y LO#E'+ rief aearance t-at

-e continue+ to our t-e coffee until t-e cu i+ oerflowin."

LO#E leae+ t-e kitc-en area and continue+ to walk down t-e -allway"

A @*LE #O5S +woon at -i a+ -e walk+ y"

*not-er officer +ittin. at -i+ de+k +to+ tyin. and follow+ LO#E a+-e walk+ acro++ t-e roo" )e wie+ a tear fro -i+ eye and +tart+

clain."

*+ LO#E walk+ acro++ eole are .iin. -i a +tandin. oation"

LO#E i.nore+ eole a+ -e walk+ to -i+ de+k wit- a r-yt-"

!-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E i+ +-outin. at a .rou of officer+ w-ile

+crilin. non+en+e on a w-ite oard" )e look+ acro++ t-e roo and

+ee+ LO#E, a +ile li.-t+ u on -i+ face a+ -e oint+ oer to -i"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#EBle++ you Locke""

!-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E turn+ ack to t-e ot-er officer+"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

:+-outin., fru+trated;


5/67

LO#E

$ find it -ard to eliee it y+elf"

$ +ent ont-+ tryin. to track t-e+e .uy+

down, tryin. to find out t-eir routine+"

$' 7u+t .lad it all cae to.et-er efore $

retired"

)*N

!alk aout endin. your career wit- a an."

!-at .un fi.-t wa+ all anyone wa+ talkin.

aout t-i+ ornin."

LO#E

Not one of y finer oent+"""

)*N

*re you kiddin. e6 %ou fired off like

2 round+ in 10 +econd+8 )ow did you een

do t-at6

#9! !O

E! C S!EE! C !)E N$()! BE>OE

LO#E i+ +een lyin. on t-e .round wit- -i+ .un ointed toward+ t-e

criinal+" )e i+ firin. raidly and +creain. like a aniac"

#9! !O

$N! C 5OL$#E O>>$#E C @ON$N(

)*N

$t wa+ aa=in.8

LO#E

!-ere'+ not-in. aa=in. aout coin.

face to face wit- a an t-at want+ to take

your life"

LO#E +tare+ wit- a lank e3re++ion in front of -i" * few +econd+

a++"

)*N

$ .ue++ t-ere'+ .oin. to e a lot ore

ca+e+ for t-e re+t of u+ now t-at you're

retirin., e-6


6/67

LO#E

$ .ue++ +o"

)*N

So w-at are you .oin. to do after you retire6

LO#E

$'d like to +ettle down +oew-ere

in t-e country and kee it /uiet"

@aye aint a few ird -ou+e+"

)*N

:lau.-+; %ou aint ird-ou+e+6

LO#E

$t'+ a +kill t-at take+ atience,

dedication, and you -ae t-e end .oal of

+uortin. t-e wildlife in your counity"

)*N i+ tryin. to -old ack -i+ lau.-ter"

LO#E

*in't not-in' funny aout a dwindlin.

Blue Jay oulation"

LO#E +tare+ u at )*N wit- a look of a..re++ion on -i+ face" !-e

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E call+ oer to LO#E fro acro++ t-e roo"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#ELO#E8 @eet e in y office" $ -ae one la+t

ca+e for you efore you retire"

)*N e3re++e+ -i+ fru+tration at t-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E .iin. LO#E

yet anot-er a++i.nent

)*N

:+-outin.; O- coe on8

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

%ou .ot a role )*N6

)*N

!-i+ i+ ull +-it8 LO#E literally

7u+t cae ackfro t-e i..e+t ca+e

of t-e year, and you're .oin. to .ie -i

anotherone6


7/67

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

%ou .ot a etter idea6

)*N

)e'+ one day away fro retirin.8

)e can't fini+- it in tie" %ou're

.oin. to -ae to a++ it off to +oeoneanyway" Let one of u+ -ae a ca+e for once"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

%ou'e worked on ca+e+ efore8

)*N

$ know you're not +ayin. t-at t-e tie

t-at old lady wa+ +een lyin. in t-e iddle of

t-e +treet wa+ a ca+e"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#ES-e -ad no idea -ow +-e .ot t-ere8

)*N

S-e -a+ Deen+ia and +-e fell8

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E


8/67

#9! !O BELLE a+-in. at t-e keyoard y -er couter"


9/67

Scene A

!-e *++i.nent

$N! 5OL$#E #)$E>'S O>>$#E" @ON$N(

LO#E +-ut+ t-e door e-ind -i a+ -e enter+ t-e roo" !-e 5OL$#E

#)$E> i+ +een +ittin. at -i+ de+k lookin. down at a olice file"

LO#E

%ou wanted to +ee e, c-ief6

!-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E look+ u"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

!ake a +eat, LO#E"

LO#E +it+ down"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

%ou'e een an officer for -ow lon., now6

LO#E

A1 roud year+, +ir"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

A1 year+ and you'e neer i++ed a

.oddan +-ift in your life" %ou'e neer

een late"""you're an e3cellent rere+entatie

for w-at eery an on t-i+ force +-ould e"

LO#E

$' 7u+t doin. y 7o"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

*nd you do it like a .oddan .eniu+"

So well, $ need you to do your 7o 7u+t

one ore tie"

LO#E


10/67

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

Don Juan Doe+ticato ilencio"

LO#E

!-at'+ io++ile"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

Not-in. i+ io++ile for t-e 5olice

force of t-i+ fine nation" * nation t-at

will reain unnaed ecau+e it i+ +o

oiou+ w-at country we lie in"

LO#E

$ don't -ae enou.- tie"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

(oddanit, LO#E8 $ work oertie all

t-e .oddan tie" $ -aen't +een y +on in year+ and all $'e -ad to eat in t-e a+t

10 ont-+ are Dunkaroo+"

eeal a .ara.e in oerflowin. wit- acka.e+ of D9N*OOS"

LO#E

So $ 7u+t -ae to take down DON J9*N,

and t-en $' done6

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

Not /uite t-i+ tie you'll -ae

a +ecial a++i.nent to colete on t-e +ide"

LO#E

*nyt-in. for you, #)$E>"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

$' .lad you're +o ent-u+ia+tic" $ need you

to take one of t-e new .uy+ under your win.

w-ile you take down DON J9*N"

LO#E

$'d e -ay to"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

E3cellent" $ don't dout t-at you can

c-an.e t-i+ articular officer'+ way+"


11/67

LO#E

O> 5OL$#E

)e'+ reckle++"

LO#E

%ou don't ean to tell e t-at you're

airin. e u wit-"""

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

!-at'+ ri.-t you'll e workin. wit-

theOO$E"

LO#E

#-ief8 )e'+ a loo+e cannon8

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E)e'+ y no ean+ conentional, ut

-e doe+ a dan .ood 7o a+ any an -ere"

)e 7u+t doe+ it differently"

LO#E

)e can't e tru+ted wit- anyt-in., let alone

a ca+e a+ i. a+ t-e DON J9*N u+t" $ would

rat-er .o in alone"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

)e'+ -ad -i+ +-are of ca+e+, LO#E"

La+t ont- at a routine traffic +to -e

confi+cated 12 ound+ of cocaine, a

deartent record"

LO#E

*nd tell e, #)$E>, w-ere did t-at cocaine

end u6 ound+ of it are unaccounted for

in t-e eidence roo"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E%ou know etter t-an anyone you can't a++ue

-e took it"

LO#E

!-en w-ere did it end u6 E3lain t-at to e"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

LO#E


12/67

LO#E

#)$E>, $'e neer refu+ed a ca+e in y life"

%ou know t-at" $'e 7u+t .ot a ad feelin.

aout t-i+ kid" )e'll e t-e deat- of e"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

:+-outin.; (ODD*@N$! LO#E" :+incere;$ need you now ore t-an eer" DON J9*N

-a+ ou.-t off alo+t eery co in t-i+

deartent" %ou're t-e only -one+t one left"

%ou're t-e e+t we'e .ot" $ need you to a++

t-e torc- on to t-e OO$E"

LO#E +tand+ u and walk+ toward+ t-e door"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

$ don't need to reind you w-o -i+ fat-er wa+,

do $6 (ie t-e kid a c-ance"

LO#E

O> 5OL$#E

O> 5OL$#E -it+

t-e interco on -i+ de+k"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

(ODD*@N$! DEBB%8 $ need ore Dunkaroo+8

* caera i+ followin. LO#E a+ -e walk+ down t-e -allway" )e i+

-ain. an inner onolo.ue

LO#E :t-inkin.;

!-i+ i+ it" @y la+t i. ca+e" But w-ere

do $ e.in6 O> 5OL$#E'+

office

LO#E :+till t-inkin.;

(oddanit ut $ don't want to u. -i"


13/67

LO#E turn+ around once ore and leae+ t-e office"

END +cene"


14/67

S#ENE 4

@EE! %O9 NE< 5*!NE

$N! LO*DED'S )O9SE @ON$N(

*n alar clock +tart+ u==in." * -and reac-e+ out of ed and +la+

t-e utton on t-e clock" LO*DED +lowly +win.+ -i+ feet out onto t-e

floor e+ide -i+ ed and +tand+ u" * reeal +-ot of -i+ roo +-ow+

eer ottle+ eeryw-ere" )e e3-au+tedly ake+ -i+ way oer to t-e

at-roo"

#9! !O LO*DED in t-e +-ower lat-erin. -i+ -air wit- +-aoo w-ile

+okin. a ci.arette" )e turn+ off t-e water and .et+ out of t-e

+-ower"

LO*DED take+ a lon. look in t-e irror efore lookin. at a irrorwit- #O#*$NE on to of it" )e /uickly ake+ a line and +nort+ it

in+tantly"

LO*DED walk+ out of t-e at-roo and ake+ -i+ way to -i+ kitc-en"

!-ere i+ a ottle of alt li/uor waitin. for -i" )e our+ -i+elf a

drink in a +-ot .la++, followed y anot-er" !-e two drink+ weren't

enou.-, and -e e.in+ to drink directly fro t-e ottle"

!-ere i+ a knock at t-e door" LO*DED walk+ oer and oen+ it, only

-ain. a towel around -i+ wai+t"

LO*DED

#an $ -el you6

LO#E

$' Officer Locke, #-ief Bar

LO*DED cut+ -i off"

LO*DED

%ou're y new artner"

LO*DED oen+ t-e door all t-e way and trie+ to +-ake LO#E'+ -and"

LO*DED

:cont'd; %ou're t-e .reat LO#E t-at

$'e -eard +o uc- aout"

LO#E

*nd you're"""


15/67

LO#E notice+ t-e ottle of alt li/uor in LO*DED'+ -and"

LO#E

:cont'd; LO*DED"

LO*DED


16/67

LO*DED look+ u at LO#E w-o i+ +tarin. at -i cally"

LO#E

$ won't work wit- +oe coke-ead 7unkee

on t-e i..e+t ca+e of y career8

LO*DED +win.+ at LO#E ut LO#E counter+ it and in+ LO*DED u

a.ain+t t-e wall, .rain. -i y t-e +-irt

LO#E

Li+ten kid" $ don't need a loo+e cannon

on t-i+ ca+e wit- e" Eit-er .et your

+-it to.et-er or tweak out of your ind

on Deil'+ 5owder for t-e re+t of your

life"


17/67

LO*DED

>uckin. fanta+tic"

LO#E

DON J9*N i+ alway+ one +te a-ead""-e alway+

-a+ een"

LO*DED

%ou'e tried takin. -i down efore6

LO#E

Eeryone fro -ere to an+a+ -a+ tried

takin. -i down" But -i+ .oon+ are +o

uc- ore rotectie of -i now"

Eeryw-ere -e .oe+ C -i+ ri.-t -and an,

S@OE% !


18/67

LO#E

But t-o+e two are t-e +all fi+- we -ae

to fry"


19/67

END S#ENE"


20/67

S#ENE 4 )ELLO, DON J9*N

E! #$!% S!EE!S @ON$N(

!wo en are driin. in a car to.et-er ca+ually" !-ere i+ a +on.

layin. /uietly in t-e ack.round F#-er'+ ?!urn Back !ieG" !-ere i+

a reeatin. an.in. +ound coin. fro t-e ack of t-e car" !-e en

aroac- a +toli.-t" !-ere i+ a nerou+ lookin. an in t-e lane ne3t

to t-e" !-e a++en.er in t-e car, S@OE% !


21/67

SLEEH% J$@

O- (od O- (od O- (od O- (od

S@OE% !


22/67

$% $@ JOBS

$' +ayin' it couldn'te -eled -i+

+ituation"

S@OE% !


23/67

$% $@ JOBS


24/67

S@OE% !


25/67

S@OE% !


26/67

$%, .ie -i a .ood ol' fa+-ioned $@ JOB

wit- t-at wrenc- of your+"

SLEEH% J$@

But $ didn't 7i you oney8 $t all add+ u8

$% a+-e+ SLEEH%'+ -ead wit- a wrenc-" Blood i+ coin. out of

SLEEH%'+ face" DON J9*N +ile+ enacin.ly" S@OE% i+ +tandin. readin.

a file of aer+"

DON J9*N

Lyin. until t-e oent t-at you die"

%ou di+.u+t e e++e" %ou're +cu, SLEEH%"

$% $@ JOBS

$ .ue++ we know -ow -e .ot t-e nae SLEEH% J$@

$% and DON J9*N lau.- aon.+t t-e+ele+ a+ SLEEH% J$@ fall+ tot-e floor +oaked in lood"

S@OE% !


27/67

y rand new, 5er+ian ru.6

$% $@ JOBS

$ .ue++ -e +-ould -ae een called

Not+oSlee=y Ji"

S@OE% !


28/67

S#ENE K

S!*$()! 95 (

$N! #* NOON$S)

LO#E i+ driin. w-ile LO*DED i+ +ittin. in t-e a++en.er +eat like

an an.+ty teena.er" )e -a+ ecoe a.itated at LO#E'+ y t-e ook

road rule+"

LO*DED

Ju+t let e drie"

LO#E


29/67

LO#E

$ 7u+t don't know -ow we'll .et to -i"

$ don't een know w-ere to find -i"

9nle++"""$ -ae a lan"

!-e car turn+ and drie+ down a few +ide +treet+ efore enterin. a

fancy nei.-our-ood"

LO#E

$ know a fella, t-e nae'+ SE!#)% @$E"

Local dru. dealer" :LO*DED'+ eye+ widen";

)e owe+ e a few faour+" @aye

-e know+ -ow we can find DON J9*N"

LO#E ull+ oer t-e car onto t-e +ide of t-e +treet and t-e two e3it

t-e e-icle" !-ey are near a dark alley"

LO#E!-i+ i+ t-e lace"

LO*DED

Do you t-ink -e'll -ae any dru.+6

LO#E +tare+ at LO*DED wit- a face of di++ati+faction" )e doe+n't

an+wer" !-e enter t-e +ketc-y allyway"

E! C SE!)#% *LLE% @ON$N(

LO#E & LO*DED walk +lowly" !-ey aroac- a an wit- a -ood w-o i+leanin. a.ain+t a rick wall" )e i+ wearin. a lon. trenc-coat"

LO#E

SE!#)% @$E8 Still -ere, e-6

LO#E and LO*DED are +i.nificantly clo+er to SE!#)% @$E" )e i+ a

deer in -eadli.-t+"

LO#E

*re you +till +lan.in' crack to city ayor+6

SE!#)% @$E


30/67

LO#E

%ou'e roaly +old -i cocaine"

SE!#)% @$E

)ae $ now6

LO*DED

Do you -ae anyore6

SE!#)% @$E

$ don't +ell t-at anyore"

LO#E

%ou're liin. t-e +trai.-t and narrow life, t-en6

SE!#)% @$E

Na-" $'e 7u+t -oed aoard t-e ne3t

i. trade arket"

LO*DED

@et-6

LO#E

5ro+titute+6

SE!#)% @$E

Bi..er t-an ot- of t-o+e t-in.+ tie+ a

illion" $ +ell counterfeit )S tae+"

LO#E lau.-+"

LO*DED


31/67

SE!#)% @$E

Say+ e" ecord+ are +tartin.

to e ade a.ain, +ae wit- ca+ette tae+"

$t'+ only a atter of tie efore )S

tae+ +tart flyin. off t-e +-ele+"

LO*DED)ae you +old any yet6

SE!#)% @$E

Bu+ine++ -a+ een +low" $'e re+orted to

a Muy one .et a .ra of crack cocaine

deal C ut it'll +tart to ick u +oon"

LO*DED

*ren't you worried t-at ecau+e Blue ay

i+ +uc- a etter /uality t-at you won't

ake any oney6

SE!#)% @$E

@an fuck lue ray, t-ere will alway+ e

-i+ter+ out t-ere to y y +-it"

* )$5S!E +tart+ walkin. down t-e +treet toward+ SE!#)% @$E

SE!#)% @$E

E3cu+e e for a oent, u+ine++ call+"

*+ t-e )$5S!E aroac-e+ SE!#)% @$E, SE!#)% @$E walk+ toward+

-i, and retend+ to +la -i a -i.- fie C uc- like t-e crack

cocaine dealer+ of )arle do" E3cet, you can clearly +ee SE!#)%

@$E -oldin. a )S tae in -i+ -and"

)$5S!E

%o an you .ot fluer6

SE!#)% @$E

%ou know $ do"

!-e )$5S!E take+ t-e )S tae and walk+ away"

SE!#)% @$E :to LO#E;

!-at'+ -ow it'+ done"

LO*DED

%ou'e .ot >L9BBE6


32/67

SE!#)% @$E

$'e .ot all t-e cla++ic+"

:)e oen+ u -i+ trenc-coat to reeal a few

)S tae+ -an.in. fro t-e in+ide of -i+

7acket;" *NNE O> (EEN (*BLES, !)E @*S,

@% DO( S$5, !)E L*S! *$ BENDE" %ou nae it,

$ i.-t -ae it" But if $ don't .ie e like

week+ and t-en $'ll -ae it for you"

LO*DED

Sound+ like you'e ade /uite t-e liin., @$E"

SE!#)% @$E

!-at'+ SE!#)% @$E, to you" *nd yea-, $' doin. well"

LO*DED


33/67

SE!#)% @$E

Je+u+8 >ine8 (o find t-e t- +treet Sout- *frican

e+i+tance .an." !-ey'll -ook you u wit- DON J9*N"

LO#E


34/67

LO*DED

$' +urri+ed you're *l=-eier -uin. a++

reeer+ t-at"

LO#E


35/67

t-e end of t-e +treet"

E! C @$D D*% C S$DE S!EE!

LO#E

$ don't know if $ can do t-i+"

LO*DED


36/67

LO#E

$ don't know w-at $' .onna +ay w-en we

.et t-ere"

LO*DED

Ju+t let e do t-e talkin."

LO#E

$ feel li.-t -eaded, kid"

LO*DED

$t'+ roaly t-e aint"

LO#E


37/67

!-e door oen+" * lar.e, u+cly an oen+ t-e door w-o i+ clearly a

+kin-ead" )e -a+ a na=i ar and on and i+ wearin. a leat-er 7acket"

LO*DED i+ fro=en wit- fear" LO#E look+ oer at LO*DED and +tart+ to

anic" !-e lan -a+ definitely .one +out-"

S$N)E*D


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w-at we were t-inkin."

LO*DED


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it'+ e++y"

LO*DED


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LO#E

ree cocaine to w-ateer w-ite +ureici+t

in t-i+ nei.-our-ood doe+n't kill u+8

LO#E look+ oer at LO*DED"

LO*DED

>uck you"

LO*DED t-row+ do=en+ of acket+ of cocaine oer to t-e S$N)E*D w-o

.ratefully ick+ u -i+ re+ent+"

LO*DED

!-ere C t-at'+ all of it"

LO#E

#-eck your a++-ole"

LO*DED

>uck you"

LO*DED .ra+ a rick of cocaine out of -i+ a++-ole and i+ -oldin. it

in -i+ -and" LO#E wink+" LO*DED +win.+ t-e rick of cocaine at t-e

+kin-ead and knock+ -i uncon+ciou+" !-e rick e3lode+ and cocaine

i+ flyin. in t-e air" LO*DED i+ noticealy tryin. to +niff it u"

LO#E

Let'+ .o888

LO#E & LO*DED run down t-e +treet, wiin. off t-eir face+ a+ t-ey

continue to oe t-rou.- t-e +treet" *fter runnin. /uite t-e

di+tance, t-e two +to and catc- t-eir reat-e"

LO*DED

)ow'd you know aout t-at rick of

cocaine in y a++-ole6

LO#E

!-at'+ w-ere $'d kee ine"


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!-e two of t-e -ae a oent"

)*N ull+ u in a car"

)*N

*fternoon, .entleen"

LO#E

*fternoon, )ank8 )ow'+ it .oin.6

LO*DED

uck you"

)*N

5lea+ant"


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L&L Scene M@y (irl

$N! C DON J9*N'S )9@BLE *BODE C *>!ENOON

DON J9*N i+ +ittin. in -i+ t-rone of a c-air, w-ile S@OE% !$()!ENED @*N +ittin. alone in a roo wit-

a de+k in front of -i" $t re+ele+ an interro.ation roo" !-e an

+ee+ worried for -i+ life" )e i+ +creain. for -el" DON J9*N

continue+ to watc- a+ a .rin take+ oer -i+ face"

DON J9*N c-eck+ -i+ watc-"

#ue @9S$#"

* +candalou+


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of faric in -er -and+" S-e roll+ it into a all C +oe-ow +e3ually C

and ki++e+ t-e an on t-e c-eek" !-e an i+ confu+ed a+ to w-et-er -e

+-ould e -orrified or turned on" !-e a fa

fa"

S@OE% !


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to $% to fetc- t-e #O5 fro out+ide t-e roo to rin. -i in"

S@OE% +tand+ ne3t to DON J9*N a+ $% rin.+ in a failiar face,

)*N"

DON J9*N

5lea+e C +it down"

$% t-row+ )*N into t-e c-air and oe+ acro++ t-e roo to +tand

ne3t to S@OE%"

)*N

*re t-e+e your .oon+6

S@OE% !


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$% $@ JOBS

$ don't .ot a ri.-t -and an" $ ain't een

.ot a ri.-t -and8

$% $@ JOBS reeal+ a wrenc- in t-e lace w-ere -i+ ri.-t -and

+-ould e" )*N look+ ore confu+ed t-an -e did efore"

DON J9*N

Now t-at we'e .ot lea+antrie+ out of t-e

way w-y are you -ere you fuckin. ule

fuckin. -ore6

)*N

!-ere'+ two co+ tryin. to take you down"

DON J9*N

$' +urri+ed t-ere i+n't illion+ of t-e

tryin. to take e down"

)*N

!-ey're .ettin. clo+e"

DON J9*N

)ow clo+e6

)*N

!-ey were 7u+t talkin. to SE!#)% @$E aout an

-our a.o"

S@OE% !


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LO#E

Noe"


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S@OE% !


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drinkin."

S@OE% !


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S#ENE C #)**#!E DEELO5@EN!

$N! C LO#E'S #* C *>!ENOON

LO#E and LO*DED are +ittin. in t-eir car, en7oy a nice, nutritional

eal fro !aco Bell"

LO#E

$ 7u+t can't eliee we -aen't found t-e yet"

9+ually y now $ -ae +oe +ort of lead C something.

LO*DED i+ un-a+ed y w-at LO#E -a+ 7u+t +aid" LO#E take+ notice of

LO*DED for a oent"

LO#E

Eer +ince $ et you, w-ic- wa+ t-i+ ornin.,

you'e een eit-er drinkin., +okin.,

+nortin., in7ectin., or 7u+t in-alin.

+oe +ort of ille.al +u+tance"

LO*DED


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t-o+e deon+" %ou're eit-er .oin. to

let t-e control you're life, and

you're .oin. to cradle t-at deon+

all+ all ni.-t lon. C or you're .oin.

to +ay '>uck you deon, $ will lay wit-

your all+ no ore8 !-e only all

layin. -ere i+ .oin. to -aen wit-

your out- and y nut+" Now .et layin'8'

LO*DED

$'e tried" $t'+ 7u+t eer +ince y D*D

died $ -aen't een ale to coe"

LO*DED ull+ out a ottle of J*# D*N$ELS and +tart+ to drink fro

it"

LO*DED

)e'+ t-e rea+on $ wanted to e a coin t-e fir+t lace" But DON J9*N killed

-i on a ca+e uc- like t-e one $'

on ri.-t now" @y D*D wa+ tryin. to take

-i down"

LO#E

$'e .ot in it for DON J9*N too"

LO*DED


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Like couter+" Old an"

LO#E

@y arria.e wa+ 7u+t neer t-e +ae after

y artner'+ deat-"

LO*DED

%ou ecae di+tant fro your wife6

LO#E


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LO#E


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S#ENE C BENDE

$N! C B* C EEN$N(

LO*DED i+ +ittin. at t-e ar, drinkin. -i+ ain away C a+ u+ual" )e'+

clearly -ad too any, ut -e kee+ drinkin. anyway in +ilence" )e

reac-e+ into -i+ ack ocket and ull+ out a a. of #O#*$NE and

+tart+ to ake a line on t-e counter"

B* @*N

%ou can't do t-at +-it in -ere8 (o into

t-e at-roo if you -ae to do it"

LO*DED

>uck you8

LO*DED t-row+ a ottle at t-e ar an, w-ic- reak+ on t-e wall"

B* @*N$f you reak one ore ottle on t-at wall

$'ll -ae to ut u a new wall +o cal t-e

fuck down8 $ don't -ae t-e oney for

reair+ C e+ecially in t-i+ econoy"

(o to t-e at-roo you fuckin. 7unkie8

LO*DED +lide+ off t-e ar +tool and +tule+ into t-e at-roo" )e

knock+ oen t-e at-roo +tall and lean+ into t-e toilet to oit" )e

i+ lyin. ne3t to it, in t-e fetal o+ition, coletely -oele++"

*not-er an enter+ t-e at-roo" )e'+ talkin. on t-e -one" )i+

cockney accent i+ +tran.ely failiar"""!-e failiar oice i+ wa+-in.-i+ -and+"

S@OE% !


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lion tryin. to ick u a .a=elle at a clu"

LO*DED

E+3u=e e +ir" But $ eliee $ know

you fro +oew-ere

S@OE% !


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LO*DED +to+ detainin. S@OE%"

LO*DED

$ don't .ie a rat+ a++ aout t-at an"

)e +aid $ -ae +u+tance au+e role+"

LO*DED oit+ on t-e floor

S@OE% !


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S@OE% !


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S#ENE 10 C >$N*LE

$N! C DON J9*N'S )9@BLE *BODE C N$()! !$@E

DON J9*N i+ +ittin. at -i+ de+k, wit- $% $@ JOBS iediately to

-i+ ri.-t" !-ey are ot- lookin. at t-e +ae +creen t-at wa+ +-own

reiou+ly" LO#E i+ +ittin. in t-e interro.ation c-air" DON J9*N

look+ down at -i+ watc-" )e +ile+"

!-e +ae


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u to take on -i+ deon+"

LO*DED

%ou can do t-i+" %ou can do t-i+"

%ou can't do t-i+"""%ou're arely

een a olice officer" %ou need dru.+ to

.et y and you turned your ack on t-e

one an w-o cared aout you w-en -e

needed you o+t" (oddanit88

LO*DED +it+ in t-e car, t-inkin. of all t-e eorie+ -i and LO#E

-ae to.et-er" @eetin. eac- ot-er at t-e front door, .oin. lack face

and +truttin. down t-e +treet, and t-e wi+e word+ of LO#E are -eard"

Suddenly, LO*DED +ee+ LO#E aear in t-e +eat ne3t to -i"

LO*DED

orce"

LO*DED

Like a 7edi6

LO#E

No you idiot" !-e 5olice >orce"9+e t-e 5olice >orce and call for ack u"

LO*DED

>uck you $' a lone wolf"

LO#E

!-en u+e deadly force8 Ju+t +ae e

.oddanit"


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LO*DED

But -ow6 )e'+ a dru. lord and $' a

dru. addict8

LO#E'+ .-o+t i+ no lon.er +ittin. in t-e car"

LO*DED

(oddanit8 LO#E coe ack8

LO*DED ull+ out -i+ +i.nature a. of cocaine and our+ -i+elf a

line on t-e da+-oard" LO#E'+ oice lin.er+ in t-e ack.round" MMy

partner died while trying to set up a rehab program for inner city

children, like you.!-o+e word+ +truck a c-ord in LO*DED C -e low+

-i+ line of cocaine away and .et+ out of t-e car"

$N! C DON J9*N'S )9@BLE *BODE C N$()! !$@E

!-ere i+ a knock at t-e door"

DON J9*N

uck $ +till wi+-ed we were u+in. t-at

+ecret knock" !-en we would know if t-ey

were on our +ide or not"

$% $@ JOBS

Suddenly t-e +ecret knock +ee+like a really .ood idea"

!-e door i+ kicked down, and LO*DED enter+ t-e roo +creain. firin.

-i+ i+tol at $% $@ JOBS and DON J9*N" 9nfortunately, DON J9*N

and $% $@ JOBS -ad .un+ of t-eir own, and +-ot LO*DED at lea+t a

do=en tie+" )i+ loody cor+e fall+ to t-e .round in an anti

cliactic attle"


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$N! C !O!9E OO@

!-e woan -ear+ t-e +-ootin." S-e +to+ -er routine 7u+t for a

oent" LO#E +ei=e+ t-i+ oortunity to -eadutt t-e


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DON J9*N

Don't worry $%"""don't worry at all"

DON J9*N reac-e+ for a i+tol underneat- -i+ de+k" )e .ra+ it, and

fire+ at LO#E, ut -it+ $%" LO#E t-row+ -i a+ide, droin. -i+

.un, and lean+ on t-e ot-er +ide of t-e doorway out+ide of t-e roo"

DON J9*N

S-it8

$% $@ JOBS

Bo++ you +-ot e8

DON J9*N

@aye if your fat !e3an a++ .ot t-e -ell

out of t-e way $ wouldn't -ae -it you,

e++e"

!-ere are +i.n+ of life in LO*DED t-at only LO#E i+ noticin. a+ DON

J9*N and $% continue to ar.ue"

$% $@ JOBS

$ t-ou.-t you were a ark+an8

DON J9*N

%ou .rin.oe+un=ooc-a cock .ar.lin.

fuck a++" Don't take your own +tuidity

out on e"

LO#E oint+ to t-e .un on t-e floor near LO*DED" LO*DED +tart+ to

reac- oer, +till uneknown+t to DON J9*N and $%" LO*DED now -a+

t-e .un in -i+ -and+, and -e oint+ it at DON J9*N w-o -a+ now

noticed"

DON J9*N

:lau.-+;


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LO*DED

:Noi+e of 5orky 5i.;

LO*DED +end+ a ullet ri.-t t-rou.- t-e +kull of DON J9*N DO@ES!$#*!O

$LEN#$O" DON J9*N fall+ to t-e .round, lifele++" LO*DED lean+ ack

to t-e .round" LO#E ru+-e+ to -i+ +ide"

LO*DED

!-at'+ all, folk+" )ow'd $ do"""o++6

LO#E

%ou do .reat, kid"


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$%

$' +orry aout +ettin. you u after we

naed t-e i." $ didn't want you to find

out"""

S@OE% !ind out w-at6

$% $@ JOBS

!-at $ was leakin. inforation aout

DON J9*N to t-e fed+"

S@OE% !orced awkward lau.-ter"

$% $@ JOBS

So we're +till friend+6

S@OE% !


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S#ENE 11 C )*55% END$N(S

E! C S!EE! C E*L% @ON$N(

LO#E and LO*DED are -eadin. down t-e +treet" LO*DED, +till in

LO#E'+ ar+" !-ey -ae -ad a lon. 7ourney, and it'+ +tartin. to

+-ow" LO#E colla+e+ and LO*DED fall+ to t-e .round"

LO#E

$ can't do it, kid"

LO#E i+ .a+in."

LO#E

$ can't ake it to t-e office in tie

for y retireent arty" %ou need edical

attention"

LO*DED$'ll e fine" Let'+ .et to t-at

retireent arty"

LO#E

$ can't do it" $ 7u+t can't"

LO*DED

$f $ can not +nort cocaine efore enterin.

a .un fi.-t, you can walk anot-er 100 etre+

to t-e office" $ can literally +ee t-e

uildin. fro -ere"

LO#E

%ou didn't +nort cocaine efore t-e

fi.-t wit- DON J9*N6

LO*DED

Not een a little it"

* tear of ride fall+ fro LO#E'+ c-eek"

LO#E$'e neer een late for anyt-in. in y life"

5au+e

LO#E

"""and $' +ure a+ all -ell not .oin. to

+tart now" #'on kid8


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LO#E ick+ u LO*DED once ore and t-ey +tart walkin."

$N! C 5OL$#E O>>$#E C @ON$N(

* crowd of olice officer+ i+ c-eerin. a+ LO#E and LO*DED enter t-e

office to.et-er" #-aa.ne i+ oed, een t-ou.- it'+ arely *@,

and eeryone i+ con.ratulatin. t-e two officer+" Een )*N i+ re+ent

at t-e cereony, and clain. wit- a +ile on -i+ face t-at fake

a++-ole"

!-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E walk+ oer to LO#E and LO*DED" )e i+ +ilin.

until -e +ee+ t-e wound+ on LO*DED

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

Dear (od8 Soeone call 118

!-e w-ole office fall+ +ilent"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

Becau+e t-e+e two officer+ are on fire!

!-e office lau.-+ and c-eer+ and all t-at fun -ay +tuff"

#-ief of 5olice

But +eriou+ly +oeone call an aulance

t-i+ .uy i+ .oin. to leed out if -e

doe+n't .et edical attention a"+"a""

!wo ot-er officer+ carry LO*DED away, and LO#E +ile+ at -i, and -e+ile+ ack"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

So -ow'+ it feel to e a retired an, LO#E6

LO#E

Like freedo, #)$E>"

LO#E look+ oer at LO*DED w-o i+ ein. carried out of t-e office"

LO#E%ou take care of -i, okay6 Don't let -i

work late, ake +ure -e eat+ ri.-t C t-ree

eal+ a day" *nd -e like+ it w-en you lay

o+cene +on.+ w-en -e'+ around C it cal+

-i down"

!-e #)$E> O> 5OL$#E lau.-+" )*N +ilence+ t-e crowd"


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)*N

Eeryone, eeryone" Li+ten u8 $ would like

to roo+e a toa+t C to t-e .reate+t

Detectie #on+tale Officer t-i+ force -a+

eer +een C +olin. , ca+e+8

Eeryone c-eer+"

LO#E

O> 5OL$#E

$ know C it'+ incredile" !-at'+ ore

t-an any ot-er Detectie #on+tale Officer

eer8 %ou +-ould e roud"

LO#E

*ctually $ -ae O#D and t-i+ i+ .oin.

to u. e for t-e re+t of y life" $t'll.ie e 5!SD"

#)$E> O> 5OL$#E

O> 5OL$#E

$t wouldn't e ri.-t8 So8 LO#E, $

-ae 7u+t oneore ca+e for you if

you're intere+ted8 Do you t-ink you andyour artner are u for it6

)*N :fro t-e ack.round;

*re you fuckin. kiddin. e ri.-t now6

LO#E


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J9*N DON

$' waitin. for you, LO#E"

!)E END"

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