text dependent analysis introduction and conclusion
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Text Dependent Analysis
Introduction and Conclusion
Remember the AREA Cinderella example?
•Get your writing folder.•Find the original AREA Cinderella example from your writing folder and put it on your desk.•Put the new Cinderella paper (on chair) next to it. Compare.•Fill out “What do you notice?”
Writing an Introduction
Dorothy has Glinda the Good Witch; Sleeping Beauty has Flora, Fauna, and Merriweather; Peter Pan has Tinkerbell. Every teenager could use a magical ally. For Cinderella, it is her fairy godmother who helps her overcome the oppression of her family and find her prince. The Fairy Godmother is a minor character who has a major impact in Charles Perrault’s Cinderella.
• Lead• Transition• Summary
sentence• Restatement of
Prompt• Title• Author
Lead: hook the attention of the reader
Dorothy has Glinda the Good Witch; Sleeping Beauty has Flora, Fauna, and Merriweather; Peter Pan has Tinkerbell.
Every teenager could use a magical ally.
• Lead• Transition• Summary
sentence• Restatement
of Prompt• Title• Author
A Lead…
• begins the essay. • requires more than one sentence.
• Includes a transition into a summary statement or restatement of the prompt.
Transition:
• wraps up the lead
• Moves into summary sentence
Cliché leads to avoid…
• The Definition Lead• Ex: Webster's Dictionary defines cliché as a phrase or word
that has lost its original power from overuse.
• The Quote Lead• Ex: Cinderella tells us, “A dream is a wish your heart
makes.”
• The Stating the Obvious Lead• Ex: Cinderella is the star of her very own Fairy Tale.
NUMBER ONE OFFENDER…• The Question Lead
• Ex: Have you ever heard of Cinderella? Well, I have.
Summary Sentence: briefly state the main idea of the text
For Cinderella, it is her fairy godmother who helps her overcome the oppression of her family and find her prince.
• Lead• Transition• Summary
sentence• Restatement
of Prompt• Title• Author
Restate the Prompt: use key words from the prompt and transition into body paragraph
The Fairy
Godmother is a
minor character
who has a major
impact in Charles
Perrault’s
Cinderella.
• Lead• Transition• Summary
sentence• Restatement
of Prompt• Title• Author A
Restate the Prompt: use key words from the prompt and transition into body paragraph
The Fairy
Godmother is a
minor character
who has a major
impact in Charles
Perrault’s
Cinderella.
•Where have you seen this sentence before?
Body Paragraph (you already did this)
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Writing a Conclusion
Cinderella features many minor characters, but none influence Cinderella more than her fairy godmother. This rags to riches tale proves how important minor characters are in any piece of literature. It’s no wonder The Fairy Godmother’s impact was so significant; she’s the one holding the magic wand.
• Restatement of Prompt• Title• Author• Transition• Final Remark
Restate the Prompt: use key words from the prompt, but do not repeat the same sentence from introduction paragraph
Cinderella features
many minor characters,
but none influence
Cinderella more than her
fairy godmother.
• Restatement of Prompt• Title• Author• Transition• Final Remark
A
Restate the Prompt: use key words from the prompt, but do not repeat the same sentence from introduction paragraph
Cinderella features
many minor characters,
but none influence
Cinderella more than her
fairy godmother.
•Where have you seen this sentence before?
So What? Transition: What does the evidence prove? Move into final remark.
This rags to riches tale
proves how important
minor characters are in
any piece of literature.
• Restatement of Prompt• Title• Author• Transition
• Final Remark
Final Remark: Wrap it up, give reader something to think about, and show some style!
It’s no wonder The Fairy
Godmother’s impact was
so significant; she’s the
one holding the magic
wand.
• Restatement of Prompt• Title• Author• Transition• Final Remark
Let’s turn your paragraph into 3 paragraphs!
• Put your two TDA paragraphs from Schooled / Trouble on your desk.• Choose the better paragraph to use as a body paragraph.•Homework: Complete introduction and conclusion Prewrite for your choice body paragraph on the back of today’s notes.