the tale of epic mcawesome, or the best book ever writed
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CHAPTER 1
The Daily Life of Epic
McAwesome
There was once a guy named Epic McAwesome. This
guy was a pretty regular guy, except for the fact
that he was incredible in every way humanly
possible, and some that weren't, including (but not
limited to) being stronger, faster, smarter, and
awesomer than anyone else in his town. The only
person cooler than him was me. Epic lived in a
suburban town called Suburbia, and it was awesome,
like everything else about him. But he was lonely
and misunderstood, because no one was quite as
awesome as him. All his friends thought he was too
amazing to believe, and everyone else was jealous
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of him. All the people who were jealous of him
liked to be mean bullies all the time, saying mean
stuff to the young Epic McAwesome, and that made
him sad. But he was a tough kid, and at the age of
seven he decided to become a pro football player.
He played football with all the major teams, and
every team he played on went to the Superbowl. But
he decided to retire with millions of dollars after
only seven years, and he shamed all the bullies in
every way humanly possible. In fact, most of the
people who had made fun of him were so ashamed,
that they decided to put themselves in jail. But
none of that really has anything to do with the
story. Because at this time, Mr. McAwesome is
completely happy with his life and everyone loves
everything about him.
But on the day I take you to now was February
30, Epic was sixteen and living on his own. Even
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though he wasn't a legal adult, it didn't matter
because he was still the manliest man in the world
(except for me). The first thing he did when he
woke up that day was to put on his cloths, a green
shirt, blue jeans, white socks, and no shoes. Epic
hated shoes, because they made his toes itch.
Besides, he was a trained fire walker, so it was
always okay to walk on whatever was on the ground
for him. His parents didn't exist, because he was
born out of pure coolness, so Epic made his own
breakfast of toast and eggs. But they were Epic
toast and eggs, so it wasn't like a normal person.
In fact, instead of chicken eggs, fried two ostrich
eggs, and he had made the bread with the ground
bones of the bear he strangled. His whole body was
thin and muscular, with an Epic buzz cut, and all
the girls were looking in his windows. As Epic
pulled the curtains closed, he leaned back in his
chair and considered what he would do that day.
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Maybe I should go see a movie or something, he
hummed to himself. After all, it's always a good
time for a movie.
He looked out his window again, and decided it
would be better not to, since he would probably be
swarmed by girls the second he stepped through the
door. Perhaps he should go in disguise? He looked
through the newspaper, but found that nothing
seemed to be on that was cool enough for someone
like him. Well, there went that idea.
I might as well work out, he decided. While
I watch TV and practice my ninja skills.
So he did. He did 100 pushups, then he did 400
situps, then he bench pressed his couch while using
his toes to channel surf. As usual, nothing was
Epic enough for him. He considered if he should
actually break down and get dish. But whatever.
He decided after a while that it would be best to
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watch some manly Saturday morning cartoons. After
all, what's more manly than Spongebob and My Little
Pony? Absolutely nothing! Ponies rule the world!
YEAH!!!
After he was done, Epic quickly combed his
amazing hair. He hadn't worked up a sweat with
such a simple workout. But he still needed to find
something interesting to do for the day. After a
moment's thought, he decided to put on a trench
coat, because it would be cool. Then, he sneaked
out through the back door. The girls never looked
for him in his backyard! With a quick jump, he
leaped over the eight foot tall fence, running into
the street and expertly weaving through traffic.
He had to get some donuts for the day. He always
ran out of donuts. But that's okay, because he
also got his regular pay check for being the
coolest man alive (other than me). Therefore, he
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had money for everything. And, when he didn't have
enough money for something, he could just ask one
of his fans. What a cool guy!
The cashier, Bobby McBob, looked up as Epic
walked into the shop.
Howdy, dude, Bobby said. You're the
awesomest person ever, how many doughnuts do you
want today?
Thanks, man Epic said. I just need a dozen
for the weekend.
That's normally ten dollars, but for someone as
cool as you, it's only six.
Yes, that makes sense, Epic said. Here you
go.
Bobby handed Epic a box of doughnuts, which Epic
took. He stepped outside, to see a mob of girls
running his way, holding up traffic in their wake.
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Darn this coolness, Epic said. Sometimes it
feels like a curse.
He quickly scaled the wall of the doughnut shop,
making another clean getaway. It was time to go
see his love. The great and nice and wonderful
Mary. Epic didn't know her last name, but she sure
was pretty, and he loved her with all his heart.
In fact, he had known that he loved her even before
he met her in the chat room. Come to think of it,
he still hadn't met her in person. But she was
still amazing.
I know, he said. I'll meet Mary today.
Since I have an amazing sense of direction, I can
find her almost immediately.
Mary Smith was a lovely girl, with thick red
hair and the most beautiful smile you ever saw. On
that fateful day, she was sitting in front of her
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computer, working on some awesome stuff, like
watching videos of kitties. She was 20 years old,
and dating Epic online, and it was okay that he was
technically not an adult because 1) he was so cool,
and 2) Hey, if glittery vampires can date teens,
why can't 20-year-old retired people? After all,
why not retire when you've just inherited ten
million dollars, with absolutely no inheritance
taxes. You see, inheritance taxes are only for
people NOT related to Epic McAwesome in some way.
And dating him is the best way to not pay taxes,
unless you're a guy. He's totally not gay.
As she was finishing her breakfast, Mary heard a
knock on the door. She quickly hurried downstairs
to see who it was. To her surprise, when she
opened the door she saw a man in a cool trench
coat. It was Epic McAwesome! Isn't that cool?
Mary nearly swooned from his pure coolness. It
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radiated off of him like the smell radiates off of
overripe bananas.
Hello, Mary, Epic said. It's good to see
you.
It's good to see you to, she said from her
spot on the floor where she had lost her balance.
You should come over more often.
Yes, I probably should, he said. Doughnut?
Mary happily took one of the pastries from
Epic's box. It was the most amazing doughnut she
had ever tasted. But since HE had bought it, why
wouldn't it be the best doughnut ever. The day
went quickly for them, and it was with many tears
that they parted ways. Epic started home, and Mary
stayed at her place. But they both knew they would
see each other again soon. In fact, their next
date was scheduled for the following Tuesday.
As Epic walked towards his home, he couldn't
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help but feel like he was being followed. His
intuition kicked in, and he twirled around to punch
a mugger right in the face. The guy fell down
unconscious, but there were six other goons with
him. Epic knew that he had been set up, even
though he hadn't planned on going to see Mary or
anything like that. Apparently, someone had just
known he would be out doing something that day.
You're not gonna get away with that, one goon
said. We're going to beat you up and take all
your money.
Yea, said another goon. Plus, if we can take
on the most amazing and coolest person ever, then
we'll be the most amazing and coolest people
ever!!
Hey, I'm the real coolest person ever, and
you'll never be able to beat me.
All the muggers shuddered when they heard the
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author's voice.
Please, take it easy, said the leader. We
meant the secondcoolest person in the world.
Everyone knows you are the greatest.
Good.
Well, Epic said. That was certainly...
interesting. Now, can we get this over with? It's
getting late.
Yes, the lead mugger said. It sure is, my
mom will probably be wondering where I am. Let's
get him!
With that, all seven goons charged at Epic with
baseball bats, except for the one who he had
knocked out. That one just stayed on the ground.
It's no fun to be knocked out (take it from me. I
wasn't always the awesomest person in the
universe). They began viciously beating on his
rock-hard abs, but all their baseball bats cracked.
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Then, it was McAwesome's turn. So, he hit the
first thug in the face, breaking his nose and
knocking him out. The next thug tried to bite
Epic, and it actually hurt when the guy's teeth
sank into Epic's awesome bicep. But it was only a
flesh wound, and Epic easily threw the unfortunate
man to the ground, stomping on his face to knock
him out as well.
The thugs tried to get away, but Epic knew he
couldn't let these people get away. He easily
grabbed all of them, and slammed them into a wall.
Then, he called the police with his mind. Soon,
sirens could be heard in the distance, and Epic
knew his job was nearly done. The captain of the
force saluted him, smiling broadly.
That's the third group this week, the captain
said. Are you sure you don't want to become a
superhero? After all, you're so much better at
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dealing out justice than people who are paid to
dish out justice.
No, Captain, Epic said. I just want to be of
service wherever I can, whenever I can. Besides,
most of them attack me in order to steal my
coolness.
Whatever, the captain said. Well, have a
good evening, Epic.
You to, Captain, he replied.
As Epic started home, a menacing figure took his
eye away from the massive telescope of evil. Yes,
this Epic McAwesome would be a problem, the villain
knew. But there was no way that would stop him
from bringing about his evil plans. The cloaked
man let out a long, loud laugh of pure madness as
he madly ran around his lair of evil, viciously
scribbling down ingenious plans that could bring an
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end to the world as we know it.
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Chapter 2
Evil Comes To Town
Seven evil goons sat in a prison cell together,
planning to do bad things. It was no fun being
sent to jail for trying to beat up the (second)
awesomest person in the entire world. But here
they were, in jail, with no trial. After all, why
would anyone who tried to hurt Epic McAwesome
deserve a trial? Those losers were lucky they
weren't immediately executed! In fact, why weren't
they executed? It would have saved society and
taxpayers a lot of time, trouble, money, and time.
That's what should have happened, but it didn't!!
What we gonna do now? asked one of the dimwit
nincompoops. We couldn't beat him, and now we're
in jail for trying.
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Here's the plan, said their leader, Boss
Nincompoop. We'll use plastic spoons to tunnel
through the concrete wall. Then, we'll try running
McAwesome down with a tank!
Great idea! said another bad guy. But where
will we get a tank?
And how will we tunnel through concrete with
plastic? asked another one.
Easy, said boss the boss nincompoop, Bill.
We've just got to be patient to get through the
wall, then we need to steal a tank from the
military base that is conveniently right down the
street from the prison!
But what if we get caught? one asked.
They'll probably shoot us with flamethrowers, then
eat our roasted flesh!
The gangstas began arguing, but the argument was
cut short abruptly by an argument stopping sound.
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They all listened intently, until... the wall
exploded. Fire and cement flew everywhere, but
none of the thugs got hurt because they're an
important plot element. After all, a great villain
needs henchmen, am I right? Yes, I am, because I'm
always right. As the smoke cleared, a man stepped
into the small and stuffy cell.
Hello, he said. I am your new boss, Lucifer
Diabolic, soon Lord Diabolic or Grand Emperor
Diabolic. Or maybe 'that guy who destroyed the
entire world.' Take your pick.
Cool, said Boss Bill. We're totally in!
Yea, I've always wanted to be a homicidal
maniac's henchmen! one of the others said.
Splendid, Diabolic said. Now, take this
serum, and inject it into yourselves. It will make
you into perfect minions.
Diabolic handed Boss Bill a syringe, which Boss
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Bill proceeded to jab into his arm. As soon as the
serum entered his bloodstream, Boss Bill could feel
his body change. He became tougher, stronger, his
skin turned gray, and his eyes became a glowing
red. His teeth grew into fangs. The others all
clapped happily as they saw their boss turned into
a perfect minion for the evil Lucifer Diabolic.
So, what exactly am I? Ex-boss Bill asked.
Well, Diabolic said. I took DNA from a
frozen vampire, a zombie, and a ninja, and then I
put it all in that syringe. So, you're a
Vampzominja.
Cool! all the bad dudes shouted in unison.
Yes, it is, Diabolic said. After all, I,
being the smartest man in the universe, used my
genius to make the serum. So how could it not be
cool?
All of the thugs immediately injected themselves
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with the stuff, turning into similar vampzominjas.
And they were awesome, because Lucifer Diabolic had
made the most amazing of all formulas with his
geniusness. How evilly awful of him! But it's
still pretty awesome.
Epic McAwesome finished his eighth set of car-
presses, deciding that it had been plenty for the
day. But just as he was getting ready to go
inside, he felt something was wrong. Something was
horribly wrong. Terribly wrong. Very bad. In
fact, it was the most bad thing he could ever
imagine. What could be happening? He knew he had
to find out.
The mob of girls closed in around Epic as he put
down the car he had been lifting. Admittedly, it
had only been a small car, but even someone as
awesome as Epic McAwesome was still technically
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human. Even if he was more cooler than any other
human ever to live. Besides me, of course.
Would you please stop saying that? Epic asked.
You haven't even done anything.
Shut up! Who's writing this story? You, or me?
Whatever, Epic said. I may be the epitome of
Mary Sue, but at least I'm not some pathetic voice
who just sits around bragging about how awesome he
is.
The author didn't respond to that.
So, where were we? Ah, yes, Epic was trying to
escape from the fan girls. He quickly leaped over
the nearest one, running down the street as fast as
his amazingly large and powerful legs could carry
him. He was at the prison in no time. But he was
still too late.
Epic! one of the guards called. We've got a
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breakout, and we don't know what to do because
you're the only competent person in this story!
Yes, I know, Epic replied sarcastically. But
what exactly happened?
Some horribly evil person blew a hole in the
wall and turned a bunch of inmates into
vampzominjas with his evil serum of terrible
badness, the first guard said. Actually, that
was pretty cool.
I imagine it was, said Epic. But where did
they go?
His question was answered by the sound of an
explosion in the distance.
Officer, Epic said. I think I might need to
borrow a car.
BWAHAHAHAHA! Lucifer Diabolic cackled. Not
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even Epic McAwesome will stop me from destroying
the entire world!
The vampzominjas... you know what, that word is
getting on my nerves, let's just call them
minions... anyway, the minions all laughed as well.
They were busily stealing things from the secret
military base mentioned earlier. Such as a tank,
guns, nukes, and internationally illegal bio
weapons such as zombie and vampire viruses.
Wait... why does Lucifer Diabolic need vampire and
zombie viruses if he already had the DNA to make
his minions...? Oh, who cares? It's just too much
awesome for anyone to really care. See, this is
really the best book ever, because everyone stops
caring about plot holes!
Not so fast, someone called out.
The evil villains stopped what they were doing,
realizing that they had been spotted. All of them
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turned to look to the source of the voice. It was
the (second) most amazing hero in all the world!
There he stood, in all his glory and muscly
amazingness. It was Epic McAwesome!
Oh, I see you've come to join the party,
Diabolic said. Come, tussle with my minions.
Let's see how well that goes.
Bring it on! Epic responded.
The seven minions circled around Epic, with
throwing stars and stuff like that glinting in the
light of Epic's awesomeness. Then, ex-boss Bill
charged, baring his fangs and slashing at Epic with
his ginormous claws. Epic easily dodged out of the
way, and quickly retaliated by kicking ex-boss Bill
in the gut. The minion fell to the ground,
writhing in pain. The other six minions went after
Epic then.
Epic jumped up into the air, kicking two of the
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minions right in the face while simultaneously
grabbing a third by the head and doing a back flip
to land on his feet behind the mutant freaks. Only
three were standing now, but they had learned from
the mistakes of their brethren and... oh, who am I
kidding? Epic easily smacked all of them into
submission. Then, it was just Epic McAwesome and
Lucifer Diabolic.
You're stronger than I expected, Diabolic
said. Could we possibly just be friends?
Ha! Epic laughed. I'd never be friends with
a dastardly villain who does evil things like being
bad!
Well, it was worth a try, Diabolic muttered.
I guess I'll just have to destroy you myself,
then.
With that, Diabolic took off his cool black
coat. Then, he began to grow really muscly. His
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shirt busted open from the transformation, and his
fingers grew into massive claws. His eyes turned
red, and spikes began growing out of his back. His
teeth got really big, and he had a huge tail.
Well, Epic said. That was, rather clich.
Although the transformation sequence is usually at
the end.
Yes, yes, Diabolic said. I know that most
villains die right after the epic transformation,
but I'm not most villains. I am LUCIFER
DIABOLIC!!
With that, He charged at Epic McAwesome. Epic
lazily stepped out of the way. After all, as the
hero, how could Epic ever be defeated? Then, he
felt a pain in his gut, and felt himself flying
across the room. He crashed into the wall, and it
hurt. Diabolic had hit Epic with his tail! That
wasn't fair!
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See, Diabolic said. I'm not your average
villain who will fall before your coolness.
Epic jumped to his feet, grumbling angrily.
You just caught me off guard. Let's see if you
can do that again!
Diabolic proceeded to hit Epic in the face with
his tail, sending the amazing awesome hero
sprawling again. Epic realized that this was going
to be tough. Then, he got an idea.
As Diabolos pulled back his tail to hit Epic
again, Epic grabbed the appendage and used it to
pick Diabolos up and swung him into the ground.
Diabolic screamed with fury, getting back to his
feet immediately with no significant damage. Boy,
these guys are both so awesome! Someone should
make this whole thing into a movie! That would be
the coolest thing ever!
Sorry, said a Hollywood executive. We're
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making plenty of bad movies already this year.
Maybe some other time.
I still think it would be the coolest thing
ever.
Could you quit with the off-topic jokes and get
back to narrating the story? Epic asked as he
wrestled with the most dastardly villain of all
time. I really want to get this over with so that
I can go home and watch my show.
Same here, Diabolic said. This is getting
kind of boring.
Well sorry! I was just negotiating a movie deal,
but if that's not important to you, I guess I'll
just go back to narrating.
Epic and Diabolic fought all afternoon, with
neither one getting the upper hand or hurting the
other. Eventually, they decided to call it a draw.
Epic took the military stuff, and Diabolos took all
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his henchmen and called it a day. Then Epic went
home to watch some cartoons.
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Chapter 3
OMG!! ZOMBIES!!!
Well, said one of the cops. It looks like
they got away. I've never seen anyone get away
from you before, Epic.
Neither have I, Epic replied. That Satan
Diabolos is just as unbeatable as me. This should
be impossible.
Maybe he cheated! the captain exclaimed. He
cheated by turning into a giant mutant! That's why
he was almost as tough as you! We should add two
life terms to his sentence for that!
Yes, you should! Epic responded
enthusiastically. Or maybe if he does something
bad enough, you should give him a beheading!
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YES, YES!! To heck with the trail, we'll lynch
him as soon as he's caught! said the captain. No
one likes dirty cheaters or people who pretend to
be as cool as Epic McAwesome!
Epic and the cops continued to think up ways to
deal with the dastardly Satan Diabolic, thinking up
newer and more creative ways to dispatch him. In
fact, this went on so long that they didn't notice
that a box of nukes and a vial of zombie virus were
gone...
Grand high coolest best boss ever, said ex-
boss Bill as they were driving away from the
smoking wreckage of the military base.
What is it? Diabolic asked grumpily as he
patted his overcoat back into place.
I picked up some nukes and a bunch of zombie
virus while that cool Epic McAwesome wasn't
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looking.
Diabolic looked over at his minion. Maybe ex-
boss Bill wasn't quite as useless as he looked.
Let's see what we've got, then, Diabolic said.
Ex-boss Bill handed over the vial and a box with
'NUKES' written on the side. Diabolos looked at
the vial, which said 'makes zombies, do not use
ever (unless you are an anti-terrorist government
agency)' written on it. Diabolic smiled evilly.
Yes, this was indeed a good day. That only left
one problem... Epic McAwesome was still epic and
awesome, and there was nothing Diabolic could do
about it. In fact, he and Epic were absolutely
equal in awesomeness. And Epic was almost
certainly immune to the zombie virus. He looked
back at ex-boss Bill.
My good and faithful minion, he said. Do you
have any ideas how to deal with Epic McAwesome?
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Well, said ex-boss Bill. He's got an
underdeveloped and completely pointless love
interest. Maybe you could use her in some way?
Diabolic smiled. Yes, ex-boss Bill was indeed a
great minion. The two of them began laughing
evilly together. A long, loud, insane laugh of
those who were criminally insane. In fact, they
laughed the whole way to Mary Smith's house. Right
up her driveway. They even continued to laugh as
they knocked on her door.
Mary had heard the laugh almost a mile away.
But, being nave and innocent, she didn't believe
that it could mean anything bad. As the cackling
villains knocked on her door, although by then
their laughter had died down to a worn-out chuckle.
Mary opened the door to find Diabolic in his cool
black overcoat, with a wide hat and big sunglasses,
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but not his giant monster form, and the half-
vampire, half-zombie, half-ninja ex-boss Bill. She
smiled sweetly at them, because she was too pure to
believe that they were in any way bad. What a
wonderful person she was.
Come in, she said sweetly. I've just
finished making cookies. Do you nice men want
any?
What kind? asked ex-boss Bill. Are they
chocolate chip?
That's not important, Diabolic said. We're
here to kidnap her.
Yes, ex-boss Bill replied. But I still want
some cookies.
Fine, Diabolic said. Yes, miss, we'll have
some cookies.
The villains then had a pleasant afternoon with
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Mary Smith, and it turned out that her cookies were
indeed chocolate chip. Ex-boss Bill was content.
As he wiped the crumbs off of his zombie-vampire-
ninja chin, he leaned back and smiled contentedly.
Well, said Lucifer Diabolic. As pleasant as
our time here has been, it's time for us to get to
business.
Oh, what business could you have? Mary asked.
All my bills are paid by the government because
everyone loves me so much.
Er, we're here to kidnap you, ex-boss Bill
said. I hope you don't mind too much.
Oh my, she said innocently. Why would you
ever want to do that? The only people who would
pay a ransom are the government, everyone on this
side of the country, and Epic McAwesome.
It's just a thing that villains do, Diabolic
explained patiently. The damsel in distress is
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one of the most important parts of any good story,
you know.
Oh, you're right, she said, her eyes
fluttering innocently. I won't get in your way,
then.
Lucifer Diabolos nodded to ex-boss Bill, who
stood up and approached Mary.
Wait! she cried. This place is a mess, could
you please help me clean up before you kidnap me?
Fine, Diabolic said. We might as well. Epic
McAwesome is probably still eating doughnuts with
the cops.
So, the two villains helped Mary clean up her
kitchen, do the dishes, and put the cat out for the
evening. After all, they couldn't leave the poor
kitty stuck in the house where it might never would
be found, now could they? That would just be mean!
And Lucifer Diabolic may be eviler than anyone ever
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to live, but let no one say he's mean!
So, Diabolic said as he put the last plate on
the dish rack. Could we possibly get going now?
We've been here for quite a while, and it's getting
late.
Of course, Mary said. I wouldn't want to
inconvenience you.
Ex-boss Bill, Diabolic said. Please tie her
up.
Um boss, ex-boss Bill said. We didn't bring
any rope.
Diabolos turned and glared evilly at ex-boss
Bill. But the mutant vampire-zombie-ninja was
spared a brutal tongue lashing by Mary.
I've got some in the garage, she said
helpfully.
Thanks, Diabolic muttered.
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Ex-boss Bill returned from his epic quest into
Mary's garage after about a half hour of searching,
but return he did. He had even found the rope he
was sent to get. It's interesting how much of a
bumbling buffoon he had become right after he stole
the nukes and zombie virus.
Now, just place your hands behind your back and
hold still, Diabolos ordered as ex-boss Bill
looped the rope around Mary's wrists.
Once they were done with that, they blindfolded
her, and took her out to the truck. Then, they
went and dropped off an evil letter at Epic
McAwesome's house. For some reason, Epic wasn't
home yet.
Epic finally managed to pull himself away from
his chat with the cops. As stimulating as it was,
he did have more important things to do than eat
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doughnuts and drink coffee. Things like stop the
evil Satan Diabolos from doing evil things.
Besides, he liked chocolate milk better than
coffee.
Epic drove home in the car that the police force
had donated to him. It was actually pretty cool to
have a police car of his own, even if it was an
unmarked one. But it still wasn't as cool as the
author of this story.
When Epic arrived home, he discovered a note
taped to his door.
I wonder what this is, he mused. Maybe that
Diabolic character kidnapped my girlfriend.
He unfolded the note, and read this message:
Dear Epic McAwesome,
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We are sorry to inform you that we have kidnapped
your girlfriend and are holding her hostage.
Please come find us by yourself with no police
backup, no weapons, and no car. We're afraid we
can't tell you where we are, because then you might
tell the police or someone (not that they could
help, anyway). So, you'll just have to find us.
Yours truly,
Ex-boss Bill
(P.S., watch out for zombies)
Epic stared in horror. Those dastardly villains
had kidnapped his girlfriend. How could they?
What could be worse than this?! Well, besides
maybe if they had killed her. But that would be
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mean. Then, Epic heard something groan behind him.
He turned around, to see a bunch of zombies
stumbling down the street!! In fact, everyone in
the immediate area seemed to be a zombie! What
will our hero
do?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
!?!?
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Chapter 4
To the Rescue!!
Epic looked in every direction. There were
zombies everywhere, stumbling towards him. Their
arms were outstretched, their eyes dull and vacant.
It was looking bad, because Epic knew that being
bitten by a zombie would turn him into the most
amazing zombie ever, and the entire world would
probably be destroyed.
You know, said a soldier who just happened to
be on Epic's lawn. This here zombie plague is
actually designed to be airborne, not like those
lame zombies in movies.
You military guys still did a pretty bad job,
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epic retorted. They look like people with a bad
flu and encephalitis to make them crazy!
Look, the soldier snapped. We did the best
we could within the limits of scientific
plausibility.
Well why didn't you get some super-scientist to
break all laws of reality? Epic responded with
anger angrily. That's what all the movies do.
These freaks aren't even dead!
Whatever, the soldier said. Let's just deal
with these zombies and get some inoculation against
the plague.
Fine, Epic said. I'm going to have a long
talk with your bio weapons department once we're
done here, though.
Epic flexed his fingers and cracked his
knuckles, before putting on a pair of brass
knuckles that he carried ever where (he had a
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permit). Then, he proceeded to punch the first
zombie that stumbled up to him right in the face,
immediately knocking its head off. Another zombie
came up behind him, and he elbowed it in the gut,
knocking it in half. Then, he knocked another one
to the ground with a slap in the face. Then,
before he knew what was happening, a zombie bit him
right on the leg.
Oh no! cried the soldier. We're all doomed!
But then, Epic realized that nothing had
happened. He wasn't turning into a zombie, he felt
just fine. In fact, the bite wound healed almost
immediately, better than it had been before.
I guess I'm immune to this zombie virus, Epic
said. I am so amazing!
Yes, you totally are! replied the soldier.
We should have known that someone as amazing as
you would be immune to the zombie virus!
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Epic proceeded to punch one of his more annoying
stalkers, an overweight goth, straight in the face.
The worst part was that 'she' wasn't even a girl.
Epic found it really creepy when guys were just as
obsessed over him as girls. So, he continued to
punch zombies left and right, putting them out of
their misery and saving the human race. See, Epic
McAwesome is not only a great action hero, he's
also a good citizen of the United States! When all
the zombies were dead, Epic put away his brass
knuckles and put on a cool jacket and sunglasses,
because he felt like it. Then, he got in his car,
and drove around looking for the bad guys and Mary.
Hahahaha! Lucifer Diabolic cackled. Now that
we've got his girlfriend, Epic will surely show up
here!
Great, said ex-boss Bill. So, what are we
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going to do once he gets here?
All the minions stopped whatever they were
doing, their mouths gaping in shock. Even Diabolic
looked concerned. Then, he had a brilliant idea.
We'll tie our guest to a railroad track,
Diabolic said. And then we'll tell Epic that we'll
kill her if he doesn't surrender!
Great plan! all the vampire zombie ninja
minions shouted.
For getting us all killed, ex-boss Bill
muttered under his breath.
Just then, Epic McAwesome burst through the wall
in his amazing police car, raining bricks
everywhere. Thus, Lucifer Diabolic was forced to
scrap his tying to the railroad track plan. He had
really been looking forward to that, too.
Alright, Epic snarled. Where is she?
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Right here, Diabolic replied, stepping aside
to reveal Mary tied to a chair. You should
surrender now if you don't want me to do something
evil to her.
What can our hero do? He couldn't let that
nasty Lucifer Diabolic do something bad to Mary.
So, he surrendered. All of the mutant minions tied
him up and put him in a giant empty fish tank.
Then, they put a hose in the fish tank and turned
the water on.
Well, Mr. McAwesome, it looks like you've been
defeated, Diabolic said.
You're right, Epic said. Now just let Mary
go.
No, I don't think I will, Diabolic said. In
fact, I think I'll tie her to a railroad track!
HAHAHAHAAHAAHA!!
NO!! Epic screamed. You wouldn't dare do
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something so stupid and clich!
Yes, I would! Diabolic responded. And then,
he and all the minions left, taking Mary with them.
The water was getting higher at an incredibly
unimpressive rate (since they were using a garden
hose). Epic decided he should probably escape, and
proceeded to snap the ropes without any trouble
whatsoever. Then, he broke the giant fish tank.
It was time to go find Mary and send the evil
Diabolos to jail, hopefully for good.
You weren't serious about the train track, were
you? Mary asked.
I was completely serious, Diabolos cackled.
Oh, you wouldn't, you monster!
Don't worry, ex-boss Bill whispered. A train
hasn't run on that track for almost ten years.
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Oh, she said. That's okay, then.
Epic knew he had to do something, he had to save
Mary, for real this time. Where could those
villains have taken her? Then, it him... a
railroad track! That's where all good villains
took their prisoners. Also, it was where they said
they were taking her.
Epic hopped into his car, and sped in the
direction of the railroad. He found Mary sitting
on the railroad track waiting for him, and he then
proceeded to take her back home and asked the
police to keep an eye on her, which they did
because they knew that Epic was the coolest person
in the world (besides me).
Diabolic sat down in his giant chair of evil,
contemplating the best way to deal with a problem
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of Epic proportions (see what I did there?). It
galled him to no end that Epic McAwesome had easily
escaped the fish tank death trap. What kind of
person could do that? Anyone else would have had
at least a little bit of trouble escaping! Some
might have actually been killed!
Sir, ex-boss Bill interrupted.
What is it, my minion? Diabolic asked
dejectedly.
Well, said ex-boss Nincompoop. I've been
thinking, Epic McAwesome is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu,
right?
Correct, Diabolic said.
And thus everything about him is perfect and
all audience members either love or hate him?
Yes.
Ex-boss Bill paused for dramatic effect.
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I know his only weakness, ex-boss Bill stated
dramatically.
Diabolic looked up, startled by this revelation.
Really? What is it? he asked in shock.
I can't tell you while we're the focus of the
narrative, ex-boss Bill replied. It would kill
the suspense.
Diabolic nodded.
Yes, as soon as this chapter is over, tell me
everything about this hidden weakness. Then, we
shall defeat him, and destroy the world!
The villains cackled long and hard, until I
finally got bored enough to end this chapter.
But no, I won't end the chapter like that,
because I am the greatest author in the world!
Instead, I will tell you all about how awesome I
am! You see, I, as the best author in the world,
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must keep you all in suspense for at least two
chapters, before you find out Epic McAwesome's one
and only weakness! It will be so heart wrenching
when those bad, nasty, not-so-nice, smelly, gross
people spring it on him. You'll never see it
coming in Chapter Six! See how cool I am?
Excuse me, said Epic McAwesome. You've
already switched the focus over here where I am.
Oh, sorry.
No, don't be sorry, he replied. I'm glad to
know that those dastardly bad villains think
they've found my weakness. That will make Chapter
Six all the better when it turns out that I'm just
as invincible as I appear to be.
Yea? What about when Lucifer Diabolic turned
into the mutant freak monster thing to fight you?
I didn't lose, he said crossly. That was a
draw.
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So, what would happen if he andhis minions
attacked you at the same time?
Look, we'll talk about this when we get to it,
he said hotly. Can you just get on to the next
chapter?
Fine then. I just want to say that I'm still
even better than you.
Shut up, Epic said. When you show up and
provethat you are as awesome as me, then I'll be
impressed.
Just you wait, my friend, just you wait
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Chapter 5
Awesome Stuff Happens
This is going way to fast. I just realized that
the only way for a story to be any good is if it's
really long. Therefore, I need to make the
chapters a lot longer. Therefore, I need more
padding. Therefore, I will start going into the
redundant department of redundancy. That is to
say, I will say things lots of different times in
different ways. And then, I will say it again in
yet another way, but say exactly the same thing as
I said the first time. Also, I think I'll start
putting more stuff in each chapter. And I'll add
more action. And more combat. And more stuff.
Which will make everything much better, even though
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this story was already the best story in the world.
But just because it's better than everything else,
doesn't mean that it can't get even more better.
Also, I'm going to describe everything more. Like
Epic McAwesome's house, which I guess I never
really described.
Epic got up from his massive sofa which he had
collapsed into after a hard day of working hard to
fend off evil. The exhaustiveness was exhausting.
In fact, he was exhausted from the hard work. And
Diabolic had escaped anyway, making a clean getaway
with a whole bunch of minions and probably a sample
of zombie virus. That would be bad, because then
they could turn people into zombies. And that
could start a zombie apocalypse, which would
greatly trouble Epic troublesomely. And that would
be bad. And it would be even worse if they had
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nukes, which would greatly worry Epic in such a way
that he would be concerned.
You know, this is just getting stupid, Epic
said to the author.
Shut up.
Fine, said Epic. Don't blame me if this book
ends up on a 'top ten worst books of all time'
list, though.
Epic considered his options for a moment as he
flipped through the channels on his massive flat-
screen TV which dominated one of his living room
walls. Perhaps he could just wait for Diabolic to
make some evil move against the good citizens. Or
maybe it would be better to go hunt down the
evildoers and defeat them once and for all. Oh, he
was having such a horrible time being the awesomest
person in the world (besides me)! It really made
life so difficult, it was almost like a curse being
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so awesome! He had to make all these hard
decisions, and deal with all the adoring fans, and
all around annoying stuff like that!
Then, he decided. He would wait for Diabolic to
do whatever he was planning to do, and strike right
then. That would give Epic plenty of time to watch
cartoons and take a nap, and maybe even write a
couple fanfics about himself. After all, who
better to write a fanfic about than the second most
awesome person in the world? Well, besides me, the
single awesomest person ever in the history of
everything.
You know, Epic said. I think I'll just stop
arguing with you about this. If you want to live
in your deluded fantasy, go ahead.
Before the author could respond, a great sound
alerted Epic to the prescience of something greatly
horrible. He looked out his window to see that a
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giant robot was walking down the street of his
little town. The robot was about three stories
tall, and was made out of metal with lots of robot
armor, and it had cannons for arms that it was
using to blast lasers all over the town. Epic got
the feeling that something wasn't quite right about
this scenario. In fact, it might be kind of bad.
He got up, stretching tiredly, before putting on
his coolest jacket and Epic shades (see, see? I
made a pun! Aren't I awesome?). Then, he ran out
into the street to confront the giant robot of
doom.
This should get his attention, Diabolic
muttered from secret evil lair of evil secrecy.
It should get the attention of every military
force in the world, to, muttered ex-boss Bill.
Could you have maybe made it just a little bit
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more obnoxious?
Good point, Diabolic responded. Maybe there
should have been streamers and flags!
Ex-boss Bill gave up then. It was hopeless
trying to talk sense into this guy. In fact, ex-
boss Bill realized, Lucifer Diabolos was completely
nonsensical. How could he not have seen this
before? But the man had given ex-boss Bill and his
gang cool mutant powers of being vampire-zombie-
ninjas. So that did kind of make up for it. Yes,
ex-boss Bill decided that it was okay to serve such
a powerful master who could make him powerful. But
it was still annoying how nonsensically nonsensical
the new boss was.
Forget it, this redundant redundancy is getting
too redundant for me to keep doing. I'll go back
to the old way I was doing stuff (it was the best
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writing ever, anyway). Elsewhere, in space, alien
vampires were monitoring Earth (PLOT TWIST!) They
watched as Epic battled the giant robot heroically,
and the vampire aliens knew they would have to
destroy Epic McAwesome before they could ever
defeat the forces of Earth. They aimed their giant
armada of evil right at Earth, their lasers ready
to blast everything into oblivion...
Epic continued to struggle against the giant
robot, punching yet another hole straight through
its titanium armor. The robot groaned
mechanically, before trying to hit Epic with a
laser beam. Epic easily dodged, using a ninja move
to flip the robot over. Yea, that's pretty cool.
Then, he kicked the robot right in the torso
stomach plate and then in the face. It was so
awesome. Epic knew that the robot couldn't last
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much longer against his coolness. In fact, it
would be stupid to think that it could! Suddenly,
spaceships began to show up from out of space!
Soon, the entire sky was filled with alien
spaceships. Epic knew immediately that it was bad.
A voice was then heard all across the world.
Good people of Earth, the aliens said. We
are the alien vampires, and we are here to drink
every last bit of your blood. We hope that isn't
too much of an inconvenience for you, and if it is,
we'll do it anyway. Thank you, and have a nice
day. *beep*
Well, that escalated quickly, Epic muttered.
What happened to the good old days when aliens
just wanted to enslave us?
DOES NOT COMPUTE, the robot stated.
Want to help me beat back the evil armada?
Epic asked. After all, how can you destroy the
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world if the aliens destroy us first?
LOGIC DETECTED, the robot stated. MUST
DESTROY ALIEN INVADORS!
With that, Epic and the robot got up, dusted
themselves off, and flew up into the air to battle
the alien armada (Epic had rocket boots just in
case he might need to battle an alien armada).
Within 10 minutes, they were through the hull of
the hull of the flagship and destroying every alien
in sight. Epic left the three-story tall robot to
deal with alien minions, since no one cares about
minions anyway. He had to go find the captain of
the alien vampires and deal with him.
Then, Epic found himself in the control room,
which was filled with hundreds of alien vampires.
They all turned to look at him, eying him hungrily.
Their red eyes burned hatefully, and their pale
green skin was pale and green. And their fangs
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were long and sharp. Then, every one of them
attacked, and Epic began to beat all of them up
with his bare fists, smashing their skulls in left
and right. But he knew that they would eventually
overwhelm him with sheer weight of numbers. So, he
threw an alien vampire at the ceiling of the star
ship so hard that the vampire flew through the
hull, leaving a massive hole, through which
sunlight flooded.
AHHH! screamed all the alien vampires at the
same time. WHY DIDN'T WE BRING SUNSCREEN?!
Then, they all burned up. And that's how Epic
McAwesome saved the world from the vampire aliens,
let's hear it for...
Hold it, said the vampire alien lord. I, the
leader of all the vampire-aliens, have the power
of... SUNGLASSES and SUNBLOCK!!
Epic stared in shock as the alien vampire lord
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walked straight into the sunlight, but didn't burn
up because he had sunblock on. The only flaw in
Epic's otherwise perfect plan was exposed! But
Epic knew that he had to beat up the alien vampire
to save the earth.
So, he began pummeling the vampire alien with
his fists, turning the thing into a paste
resembling what you get when you hit a bug with
your windshield. But the alien vampire didn't die,
he kept fighting. So, Epic pulled a wooden laser
stake out of his pocket (he had those in case of an
alien vampire attack), and plunged it into the
alien vampire overlord's chest. The alien vampire
overlord screamed, and then collapsed. Epic smiled
as he looked around at the carnage. Then, he
realized something was wrong. All the sunburned
bodies were mutating. Their arms were turning into
giant bony swords, and their fangs were getting
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even bigger and more fangy. Then, he realized what
was happening: they were turning into Necrodorks!
Yes, that's right, the feared antagonists from the
hit video game Left 4 Space Rising, in which a
person fights alien Necrodorks inside of a shopping
mall from outer space! With giant plastic
lightsabers of death (Growing straight out of their
arms!), poor personal hygiene, and broken glasses!
How can our hero ever hope to survive this?!?!
Find out next time. Same Epic place. Same Epic
time.
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Chapter 6
Epic Fail
Our hero was in a fix this time, a decidedly
disturbing fix. How could he have known that all
his slain enemies would turn into Necrodorks? It
just wasn't fair! Why would this sort of thing
happen to someone as awesome as Epic McAwesome? Oh
well, it was time to dismember the zombie-things,
the only known way to kill them permanently.
So, Epic McAwesome grabbed the first Necrodork
to sprint up to him, and tore its head, arms, and
legs off. Then he did the same thing to the next
one. But then he was swarmed by the hoard of
Necrodorks, all of them trying to bite him and
infect him, but not able to because he wasn't dead
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and they weren't Transmitter class Necrodorks. So,
he continued to make mincemeat out of them, easily
shredding the useless Shredder-class Necrodorks.
Then, he opened the door, leaving the twitching
remains of the zombie things behind.
Epic was astonished to see that all the lights
had gone out while he was fighting the space
vampires/zombies. Also, there was blood and gore
and stuff like that. But Epic didn't care, because
only losers are afraid of a little blood and gore.
However, the numerous zombies sprinting down the
hall were a little more concerning. And so were
the tentacles reaching out of the ridiculously
oversized vent. You know, if Epic didn't have so
much Mary Sue power, he'd probably be dead ten
times over by the time I finish this sentence.
I heard that! Epic yelled at the author.
Epic pulled out his brass knuckles. It was time
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for business. The first thing he encountered was a
Jumper zombie, with even BIGGER fangs than it had
as a vampire. So, Epic killed it by tearing its
arms and tail off, before stomping on its head.
Then, he got attacked by a shredder with plastic
lightsaber-blade arms. So, he tore off the arms.
And the glasses. Then, he was rushed by an
explody-armed zombie. So, he threw another
Necrodork's arm at explody zombie, causing it to
explode. But the explosion didn't hurt Epic
McAwesome, and instead destroyed all the other
Necrodorks in the hall. So, Epic continued on his
heroic quest to save the world.
As he wandered through the halls killing
Necrodorks, he wondered why he was so awesome.
Maybe it was just luck. Or maybe it was fate.
Maybe God had something to do with it. Then, the
answer struck him: it was the whim of the author.
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Epic was conflicted about that (SEE, see!
Emotional turmoil is a sure sign of a great book!).
It made him so sad as he cut another zombie in half
with a karate chop. A single tear rolled down his
cheek as he realized that he was simply a product
of the author's imagination in the most amazing
book ever written.
Actually, Epic muttered to himself. My eye
itches because it got hit with alien blood.
Then, Epic was in the main room of the
spaceship. It was so cool and stuff. But then,
the doors all around him shut closed, trapping Epic
in the main room. The floor opened up, and Lucifer
Diabolic floated up into the spaceship with a jet
pack, followed closely by ex-boss Bill. They had a
sack with them, which was squirming.
Did you kidnap my girlfriend again? Epic asked
when he saw them.
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HAHAHAHAAHAAHA! Diabolic laughed maniacally.
No, we have something much more powerful than
merely a kidnapped girlfriend. Something evenyou
are powerless against!
Right, said Epic offhandedly. I'm invincible
because I am the main protagonist of this story.
So, unless you have a weapon that can pierce plot
armor, I'm really not particularly worried.
Lucifer diabolic laughed evilly, until his laugh
degenerated into an insane cackle of insanity. Ex-
boss Bill opened the bag, to reveal... A CRITIC!
Epic stared in horror as the young woman got out of
the bag. This was the most horrifying thing he
could ever imagine happening!
Thank you for bringing me here today, said the
critic to ex-boss Bill. It will be my pleasure to
rip this idiotic story apart.
Every one of those words felt like a punch in
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the gut to Epic.
Ah, Diabolic sneered. I see you're already
beginning to feel the effects of criticism. It is
the only weakness of a character like yourself!
I completely agree, said the critic. Let me
begin by saying that this is the stupidest story I
have ever read, and I will show it now mercy.
No, Epic said weakly. Please, anything but
this!
...To start off, the main character is what we
reviewers like to call a Mary Sue. He did things
that would be impossible for most grown men at a
very young age, and all around more competent
everyone else in the story, which really isn't too
hard to do considering how dumb everyone else is.
His name is so ridiculously over the top that he
might as well have a sign that says 'Mary Sue'
written on his chest. It's just ridiculous.
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Every word hit Epic like a blow. Then, he
realized that since the critic was a woman, he
could use his heroic charms on her.
Well, my dear, Epic said. I may be a bit
overpowered, but isn't that made up for by how
incredibly sexy I am?
Oh no, you can't pull that on me, said the
critic. You see, I've reviewed Twilight before,
and I am now immune to the charms of a Gary Stu's
'sexiness.' The fact is that you're just a flat
character who exists purely as wish fulfillment for
the author and the audience. You're pathetic!
Epic sank to his knees, clutching his head in
his hands and sobbing. It was too much, he was
powerless against this harsh analysis.
MWAHAHAAHAHAAHAAHA! Diabolic laughed. I have
finally gotten the better of Epic McAwesome! Now,
I am unbeatable! Soon, I shall destroy the wo-
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Oh no you don't, the lady cut in. I'm not
letting you off the hook just because he's a
loser.
What? Diabolic demanded. I'm an awesome
villain, how could you possibly put me down?
Simple, she said. You're just as bland as
the 'hero' of this story, with an almost equally
ridiculous name. You have no actual motive for
being evil, you just sort of act evil for the sake
of acting evil. You're unoriginal to the point of
cackling like an idiot every other line. If you
were any more over the top, you'd be eating kittens
and kicking puppies!
And thus, Lucifer Diabolic was floored by the
critic as well. This woman is on a roll!
Oh, and as for you, Mr. Author... she said.
Sorry, I've got to go take my afternoon nap.
We'll catch up on this later!
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I am silently cringing off-screen right now.
Please, don't tell her I'm here.
Suddenly, the ship began losing altitude, the
sky turned red, and everything burst into flames!
What's going on?! ex-boss Bill asked.
Her criticisms are tearing the world apart!
Epic said in horror. The world simply can't stand
up to this sort of harsh analysis!
Yes, yes! she said. This stupid story must
be utterly annihilated! It's so inconsistent, and
the story jumps around for no apparent reason!
There's no way this should be allowed to exist, and
I intend to put an end to it!
Oh no! How will the entire WORLD survive?!?!
Our hero has been defeated, our villain has been
defeated, and the world is being harpooned by an
angry critic! We're all going to die, die, DIE!!!
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Chapter 7
Ex-Boss Bill Saves the Universe
The critic stood over Epic McAwesome and Lucifer
Diabolic, grinning cruelly at them. The world was
falling apart, and there was nothing that either
the hero or villain could do to stop her!
Now, there is one last thing to say about this
place, she said. Everything is so-
Suddenly, ex-boss Bill jumped her from behind,
wrapping an arm around her mouth to stop her from
causing any further destruction. Ex-boss Bill had
saved the entire universe, let's hear it for ex-
boss Bill!!! As soon as the critic stopped
talking, Epic felt his strength return to him
instantly. He heaved a sigh of relief. It was
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good to be the most awesome person ever again.
Besides me, of course.
Well, that was... traumatic, said Diabolic.
We should probably knock her off.
NO! Epic McAwesome said. I am a hero, and
therefore cannot take part in the murder of a
helpless opponent.
Yes, Diabolic said. But she nearly destroyed
the entire universe. We can't let her repeat an
offense like that.
But I'm a hero! he said. I can't do
something bad, not directly anyway.
Well, what do you suggest we do with her?
Diabolic retorted.
Let's just duct tape her to a chair! ex-boss
Bill said in exasperation. Then she won't say
anything else to deconstruct the world, maybe even
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be finished off by the Necrodorks, and there won't
be any blood on either of your hands!
Diabolic looked at Epic. Epic looked back at
Diabolic. Epic shrugged. Hey, she did try to
destroy the universe, after all. So, they tied her
to a chair with duct tape, Lucifer Diabolic opened
one of the doors, and they ran away.
So, how are we going to get off of this ship?
asked ex-boss Bill.
Then, the spaceship began plummeting towards
Earth, because all the alien vampires had turned
into Necrodorks. So, they really couldn't pilot a
ship. And, by extension, the ship was plummeting,
which could result in Necrodorks invading the Earth
and turning everyone into Necrodorks! Like Earth
didn't have enough problems with the last batch of
zombie virus that Lucifer Diabolic released on Epic
McAwesome's town. Wait... what happened to those
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zombies, anyway?
As the ship crashed and Epic punched another
Necrodork in the face, he saw that the entire
population of the world had been turned into
zombies! Only rag-tag bands of awesome survivors
were still surviving! Epic couldn't let everyone
in the world be a zombie! He would have to do
something to save them all and un-zombie them!
Oh no, Diabolic whispered. Everyone in the
entire world but the lucky rag-tag survivors are
zombies now! And Necrodorks are coming to destroy
everyone and turn them into more Necrodorks! We
have to do something. After all, how can I hope to
rule the world if everyone is a zombie or
Necrodork?!
I don't know, Epic said. But it looks like
we're going to have to work together to save the
world. I think we're going to have to go to the
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Unicorn Queen in Horsetopia! She's the only one
who can save us!
Yes, the unicorn queen! Diabolic said. Of
course she can save us! Maybe she can even use her
magic to turn all the zombies into my minions!
No, I doubt it, Epic said. Her magic is only
for healing, such as purifying zombies of the
disease. Well, except when Horsetopia is
threatened, at which time she shoots laser beams
from her eyes, creates magic force fields, and
disintegrates her enemies instantly with her
molecular beam.
Epic noticed the horror in both Diabolic and ex-
boss Bill's eyes.
She only does that when her country is
threatened! Epic added quickly. It's should be
safe to approach her just as long as you don't
conquer her kingdom.
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I think my boss might have some trouble with
that, ex-boss Bill muttered under his breath.
Epic proceeded to punch a zombie in the face.
Then, he destroyed another Necrodork that came
running out of the ship. But, as ships fell all
over the world releasing Necrodorks to attack the
zombies and the zombies were attacking the
Necrodorks. It looked like it was going to be a
bad day.
So, ex-boss Bill asked. How exactly are we
going to get to Horsetopia?
Well, Epic said. It's in space, and there's
a spaceship right behind us which we just crashed.
So, all we have to do is repair the spaceship and
use it to fly away and go to Horsetopia. We just
need to clear out all the Necrodorks first.
So, they killed all the Necrodorks. And Epic
learned how to fly a spaceship designed to be
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operated by an entire crew all by himself. Of
course that was awesome and all, just like
everything else Epic did. Yea, Epic epicly piloted
the ship because he was so amazing. In fact, he
was better than the whole crew of vampire-aliens
had been! How amazing is that?!
Then, they flew away to contact the Unicorn
Queen in Horsetopia. How amazing are they going to
be with all the zombies being killed by the unicorn
armies to back up Epic? And even the villains are
now Epic's friends! How cool is that? Everything
about Epic McAwesome is amazing!
So, now the trio of fire-forged friends (one of
whom is a homicidal maniac and one who is a
vampire-zombie-ninja, but they're both good friends
of Epic McAwesome now because Epic is so amazing
that he befriends everyone who's cool).
Mhmhhmph, the critic mumbled, which is
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ducttapemouth-ese for 'Mary Sue.' Don't listen to
anything this jerk says, please. Remember, this is
the best book ever and in no way, shape, or form is
the main character a Mary Sue. He's a great
character of literature! The only greater person
is me! But hey, no one is actually better than me.
I am the Author Extraordinaire. Compared to me,
everyone else could be a headless zombie. But not
a Necrodork. Those things are actually kind of
scary with their giant plastic lightsabers growing
out of their arms, overgrown teeth, horrible
mutations, and half-rotted skin stretched tightly
over the freaky mutated skeleton, duct-taped
together glasses. You know, I think I'll just go
huddle in a corner for about an hour now, with my
teddy bear, praying that the Necrodorks can't break
the fourth wall.
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Chapter 8
Setbacks and Crap Like That
Epic McAwesome flew his spaceship epicly and
awesomely, because he was Epic McAwesome! So, he
continued flying all day and all night, until he
came upon a space armada in outer space. The space
armada had a giant Laser Moon with them, and they
were destroying planets. The fleet was from The
Galactic Empire of Evil (GEE).
Crud, Epic thought.
Surrender now, a voice called over the radio.
We are beaming you all onto the Laser Moon, where
you will be searched and then you can watch us
destroy your home world.
I want to conquer his home world! Lucifer
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Diabolic said angrily. Please don't destroy it.
Tough luck, mate, said the voice on the
loudspeaker. Prepare to be beamed up.
So, they were all beamed up by the bad guys.
They had all been captured by the GEE (Galactic
Empire of Evil)! As everyone was beamed up, and
then they were arrested by the Galactic Empire of
Evil's shock troopers. Then, they were brought
before the evil Lord Raider, who wore lots of armor
and did evil stuff all the time and raided the
refrigerator, which was why he was called Evil Lord
Bad Guy.
Well, what do we have here? Lord Bad Guy. A
hero, a villain, and a vampire-zombie-ninja joined
forces to save their pitiful home world from the
evil of the Necrodorks. Well, your quest has come
to an end.
Youve only won the battle, Epic said
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heroically. Now let us go so we can battle you to
the death.
No, said the Evil Lord after Bad Guy. Id
rather place you all in elaborate death traps,
rather than simply kill you like any rational
person would, but first I have to finish my dinner
of live puppies and kittens.
Then, the guards took Epic McAwesome and his
rather strange bedfellows away and clapped them in
irons. Then, they sealed up the brig and started
flooding it with water and piranhas. Boy dont you
hate Mondays? Of course you do. Everyone hates
Mondays. Even zombies hate Mondays. Nope, nothing
worse than a Monday. Oh, Im sidetracked again,
arent I? Yes, I am, but I dont care! Death to
all Mondays!!
Could you please stop the monologue? Epic
asked. Id really appreciate it if youd help us
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out here. You are the author, after all.
For once, I have to agree with him, Lucifer
Diabolic said. I really dont want my nice pants
ruined before I take over the world.
Fine, Ill find a way to get you losers out of
this mess. You both really suck at being
omnipotent Mary Sues.
Tell me about it, Ex-boss Bill muttered as
water began to rise over his ankles and soak into
his pants.
So, I provided a Deus Ex Machina, and the climax
isnt even for another three chapters! As the
water rose up to Epics chin, a malfunction
occurred through all the Laser Moons systems,
causing the dungeon door to fly open and the chains
to open up. Oh, and the piranhas all decided to be
vegan. So now our hero, villain, and minion just
have to fight through the hoards of shock troopers.
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awesome that its a shame not to be on the same
side as him.
Cool, Epic said. Can we just concentrait on
surviving right now, though?
Sure, said Diabolic as he killed four minions
with his monster tail of coolness.
Suddenly, a door opened up under their feet, and
the fell into a pit. In the pit was the Evil Lord
Bad Guy! He laughed maniacally when they dropped
in on him.
Ah, hello again, he said. I think Ill kill
you all right now by myself without the help of any
of my minions.
With that, he pulled out a gun and shot all of
them.
Hey, thats not the way this is done! Epic
said. There has to be a fight, and we ultimately
have to win!
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Oh, sorry, I muttered.
So, they fought, and ultimately Epic and co.
won. But then Lucifer Diabolic decided that he
wanted to make the Laser Moon his own, so he could
conquer the galaxy. So, he took the Laser Moon.
Fine, Epic said. Have fun with your new
Laser moon. Ex-boss Bill and I will be off saving
Earth.
Have fun, Diabolic said. Send me a post
card.
Hold on just one second! called an all too
familiar voice. Everyone turned to stare in
horror. It was the critic!
No, Epic said quietly. It cant be.
But it is, she said. You should have known
you couldnt get rid of me that easily. Im immune
to rip-off zombie plagues from video games.
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Epic gasped in horror. This was impossible!
And now, Im going to punch this world full of
holes, again, she said. Even as the words left
her mouth, the Laser Moon began to creak.
NOOO! Diabolic screamed in horror. Please,
dont do this!
But I will, she snickered. This obvious Star
Wars rip off is going to fall before my criticism.
Then, you will all fall into the literary abyss of
obscurity and failure!
A huge section flew off the hull, sucking half
the minions into the vacuum of space. But no one
cared because they were all extras.
And then there was Diabolics sudden conversion
to good, she said. It was completely unrealistic
and there was no foreshadowing.
Diabolic fell to his knees, clutching his chest
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in pain. Shock troopers clung to everything they
could reach, trying not to be blown away before the
forces of criticism. The critic smiled as she
looked around at the destruction. Slowly, she
walked up to Epic McAwesome. With one flick of her
wrist, she sent him sprawling.
And now, young Gary Stu, she said quietly.
You shall die.
She opened her mouth to make one last cutting
remark, but she never got the chance. Ex-boss Bill
ran up behind her, grabbing her by the waist. She
let out a scream of terror as the vampire-zombie-
ninja flung her through the hull breach with all
his strength.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Her screams slowly faded away as she flew
through the broken hull. Ex-boss Bill helped Epic
and Diabolic to their feet. Both of them shrugged
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off his help and pretended that they could have
taken care of the situation on their own.
Well, Epic said. I guess its time to
Horsetopia.
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Chapter 9
Ponies, Ponies, PONIES!!
Epic continued flying his ship towards
Horsetopia. He needed the help of the unicorn
master race to defeat the Necrodorks and turn the
zombies back into humans. When Epic McAwesome is
desperate for help, you know youre in big trouble.
Unless youre me, in which case youre just
awesome. You know, it really is nice to have the
main villain, a supporting villain, and that pesky
critic out of the way. This book will be SOOOOOOO
much better without any kind of conflict!
As Epic landed his ship, he noticed that there
were no unicorns or horses in the street. Well,
except for the useless normal horses who were just
sentient, but not cool with horns or wings or
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anything like that. They were the slaves to the
unicorn guards, because they were such losers.
After all, why should inferior beings not be
enslaved? Trick question: they should be enslaved!
YEA! SLAVERY FOR THE INFERIOR HORSE PEOPLE!!!
(Disclaimer: The author is a fictional
character, and his views do not actually reflect
those of the real author. No, the real author does
not condone slavery or believe in a master race).
So, Epic and ex-boss Bill continued on their way
through Horsetopia. Epic went up to one of the
useless horses and tapped it on the shoulder. The
old nag looked up at him tiredly.
Excuse me, Epic said. Can you tell us where
the Unicorn Empress is? We need her to help save
our world from zombies.
Sure, said the horse. She lives in the giant
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castle on top of the hill with her Unicorn court.
Now can you leave me alone to stew in my
inferiority?
Sure thing, Epic said. Ill leave you to be
oppressed in peace.
Thank you, said the horse.
Epic and ex-boss Bill continued their journey
through Horsetopia, where they met lots of nice
winged horses and magic unicorns, which was awesome
even though the streets were deserted when they
first showed up. But thats all cool. So, they
met winged horses, who were still inferior to the
magic Unicorns but were cool enough for Epic and
ex-boss Bills purposes. So, they each rode a
winged horse straight to the capital city of
Horsetopia, Unicornia! There, they were greeted by
two awesome unicorns.
Halt! said one of the unicorn soldiers. No
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inferior life forms are allowed within Unicornia!
Dont worry, Epic said. Im not inferior, I
am the famous Epic McAwesome!
Both guards stared in amazement. Everyone had
heard of the great Epic McAwesome, and here he was
before them in the flesh. Even if he wasnt a
unicorn, and by extension probably didnt have any
magic, the Queen would want to see him anyway.
Wait right here, said one of the unicorns.
Ill go find the Queen. You can talk with Steve
while were gone.
The unicorn handed Epic a rock that was named
Steve, before grabbing his companion so that they
could go together to speak with the Queen. No one
really wanted to be alone with the queen, after
all. So, Epic and ex-boss Bill waited and talked
to Steve the rock. As it turned out, Steve was a
really good listener, so Epic unloaded all his
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deepest secrets on Steve, then gave him to ex-boss
Bill, who did the exact same thing. Little did
they know that Steve secretly had a recording
device inside of him, which the Queen would listen
to and laugh at later that very night. But that
wasnt Steves fault, so Steve is still a good guy.
The Queen will see you now, said a unicorn
guard. Dont mess this up, or else shell slay
you both and banish your souls straight to the pits
of Hades.
The stallion smiled then.
Well, have fun in there, he said.
Epic and ex-boss Bill entered the Queens throne
room, where the queen was reclining in her giant
throne and eating bananas. As Epic stepped into
the room, she looked up and smiled. She was a pure
white unicorn, with a purple mane and magic
dripping off every inch of her body. She casually
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scanned Epic with her cool, calculating eyes. She
continued to watch Epic and ex-boss Bill carefully
as she ate the last of her bananas, before she
finally opened her mouth to speak.
So, she said. You are the famous Epic
McAwesome. Welcome to Horsetopia, and, more
specifically, Unicornia. Now tell me why you are
here with a reformed zombie/vampire/ninja.
Your Majesty, Epic said, getting down on one
knee. I and bill are here to plead for the
assistance of the Unicorn Empire in the fight
against the Necrodorks, and, if possible, some
mages to cure the zombie plague.
And why, pray tell, should I do that? she
asked. What can you possibly hope to offer the
people of Horsetopia that we cannot find for
ourselves? There is no reason for us to help you.
Now, you shall both die.
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The Queen stood up, her horn sparking with the
dark power of the forbidden Dark Arts. She was
about to execute Epic McAwesome and ex-boss Bill!
Any last words? she asked she slowly
approached.
Yes, I have some! ex-boss Bill said. You
must help us save our world, because Earth is the
sole provider of Bananas for the entire universe!
The queen stopped, gasping in horror at what she
had almost done.
Youre right! she said.
GUARDS! she called. Bring me the finest of
our elite magicians and warriors. We must save the
monkey world, for the sake of bananas!
The guard saluted, and ran off to find all of
the most powerful wizards in Horsetopia. He knew
how important bananas were to his dear queen.
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And bring me a banana split! she yelled after
him.
Epic then sent ex-boss Bill to go man the
spaceship. It was so embarrassing to have a
recently reformed minor villain save his life.
Epic vowed never to let something like that happen
again. As Bill left, Epic noticed the Queen eyeing
him again.
So, she said. Youre the legendary Epic
McAwesome. I have heard that you are one of the
most powerful characters in this universe.
Well, I would say that is true, Epic said.
But the truth is that I am by far the greatest
character in the entire universe.
Besides the author, said the Queen. He
really is an amazing guy. I must admit that I have
a little crush on him.
The Queens eyes went dreamy as she thought
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about the author, but then she snapped back to
reality.
Anyway, she said. Since I cant have the
author, I think that you would be the best love-
interest for me. Ive even written a fanfic about
us!
She shoved a page into Epics hands, which he
glanced over, growing paler as he read every word.
He really needed to stop being so amazing. His
only consolation was that the Queen had probably
written several dozen bad fanfics about the author.
Oh crap, I muttered after I finished narrating
that.
The Queen looked up. Epic felt a moment of
hope, but it was gone as soon as it had come.
After all, the Queen knew that she couldnt have
possibly heard the voice of the great-and-powerful
author, right? So, she still had to settle for
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Epic McAwesome.
Well, she said. I think you should marry me
as soon as this adventure is over. After all, I am
the epitome of equine beauty, and you the pinnacle
of primate perfection. Are we not perfect for each
other?