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Write Ur Story By Mary, Jessie, Ana and Ayesha

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Write Ur Story

By Mary, Jessie, Ana and Ayesha

Elevator PitchHave you ever looked at your phone and thought you could make some good out of it?

Lot’s of children today are having problems with their creative writing skills because “there are better things to do”, for example going on their smartphone. Well our app is working to solve that issue.

Our app is called Write Ur Story. This app is where you can improve your creative writing skills and your imagination which will also help you to improve your literacy skills in general.

With our app “write ur story” we intended to solve writing problems (like the above). We want to appeal our app to teens and kids our age as it would be most useful for them , but older ages can use this app as well .

Our competition is an app called Episode. With “Episode” you can write your own story and animate it, but the difference is they don’t help you improve your creative writing skills or your imagination.

Our data feasibility will come from reviews and questionnaires filled out by our target audience. Our app is not that complex, as it is easy to use and has simple instructions for you.

Background SituationWho: Dumb David

What: He is in the lowest class for all his lessons and his highest level is a 2+, his teacher are looking for ways to help him improve.

When: He is in Year 9 and has a very important test coming up.

Where: At School

Why:If he doesn't get help soon he will fail to pass the test and in the end will fail GCSE.

ProblemsProblem: Lot’s of children today are having problems with their

creative writing skills because “there are better thing to do”, for example going on your smartphone

e.g.Buzzer Buddies: students needed extra help to get

up on time for examsTransit: many parents don’t speak English and

needed their children to translate teachers’ feedback

QuestionsDo you like movies?

Or do you just wish that you could write a sequel for it?

Do you like creative writing?

Or do you just need extra help out of school?

Thank you for listening!