writing from a model elluminate writing workshop october 18, 2010
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Writing From a Model
Elluminate Writing WorkshopOctober 18, 2010
Writing From a Model
As a group:– explore (look at new things)
– observe (watch carefully, look for details)
– analyze (think about what we see)
– brainstorm (think of our own ideas)
– practice orally (speak our ideas)
On your own:– write (use what you have learned)
Writing From a Model
Writing From a Model
As we read the story,
– Listen for 6 places.
– Try to remember 2 of them.
Writing From a Model
Rosie’s Walk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pIQDo0n4mLk
Rosie’s Walk
Rosie the hen went for a walk,across the yard,around the pond,over the haystack,past the mill,through the fence,under the beehives,And got back in time for dinner.
Rosie’s Walk
Name
Who/What
What Happened
Where
How did it end?
Rosie the hen went for a walk,
Name Rosie
Who/What the hen
What Happened went for a walk,
Where
How did it end?
across the yard,around the pond,over the haystack,
past the mill,through the fence,under the beehives,
Rosie’s Walk
Name Rosie
Who/What the hen
What Happened went for a walk,
Where across aroundoverpast through under
How did it end?
And got back in time for dinner.
Rosie’s Walk
Name
Who/What the
What happened went for a
Where pastinon byoverunderacrossaroundthroughtowardbehind
How did it end? And got back in time for
Image source: http://www.whales.org.au/gallery/index.html
Name
Who/What the
What happened went for a
Where pastinon byoverunderacrossaroundover throughtowardbehind
How did it end? And got back in time for
Image source: http://www.windows2universe.org/earth/Atmosphere/clouds/cloud_il.html
Name Moses
Who/What the
What happened
went for a
Where pastinon tobywithoverunderacrossaroundthroughtowardbehind
How did it end?
And got back in time for
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Name
Who/What
What happened
Where across aroundoverpast through under
How did it end?
Got back in time for
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Name
Who/What
What happened
Where across aroundoverpast through under
How did it end?
Got back in time for
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Name Icecream, Music,
Who/What Dani’s favorite food,
Toby’s favorite sound,
What happened
went into her mouth, entered his ear,
Where past her front teeth,onto her tongue,over her taste buds, beside her molars,under her tonsils,down her throat, into her stomach,
How did it end?
And got digested before bedtime.
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