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levels markingits not that tough, lah!
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lesson objectives• By the end of the lesson, you will
learn:
• The parts of a levels marking paragraph
• The different command words
• How to write introduction and conclusion
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DEEP-C
• In each paragraph, you should use DEEP-C as a check list to ensure that your content is complete.
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D• At the beginning of the paragraph, define/
describe the measure.
escription/ definition
For Example
Reforestation is the method whereby trees are
replanted in areas that used to be forests but
have been cleared.
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E• Continue by explaining the method further,
or elaborate on relevant points.
xplanation/ elaboration
For Example
The Ministry of Forestry of Kalimantan has
implemented a Forest and Land Reclamation
Initiative Project whereby local people and
companies come together to replant trees.
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E• This is one of the most important
components! You need to give named examples
xample
For Example
For example, logging companies are required
to replant 25 commercially valuable trees for
every hectare they log.
Directive Explain/State the example
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For Example
This method is effective as forests are
regenerated quickly as teak trees are planted. Teak
trees take 5 years to mature, as compared to 25
years for other species. Therefore, it has helped to
restore 90 000km2 of forests in the year 2000.
Directive be very specific
P• State/explain the PROS of this method
ros (benefits/success)
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For Example
However, this method is not effective as
deforestation still takes place and it is taking place
faster than reforestation. In the same year,
250 000km2 of trees were cleared.Give evidence of limitations & be specific
C• State/explain the CONS of this method
• Because Cambridge values a balanced answer
ons (limitations)
Directive
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remember to have a
Balanced Argument
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qn word:
Evaluate,assess,discuss
Evaluate the strategies taken by the Kalimantan government to manage their forests.
Assess the management strategies used in Kalimantan.Discuss the ways forests are managed in Kalimantan, using named examples.
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Paragraph 1: Measure 1Write the point that you are the most confident
first.DEEP-C
Paragraph 2: Measure 2
Paragraph 3: Measure 3
DEEP-C
DEEP-C
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now that we have learnt how to write the different paragraphs,
its time to tackle the
Introduction
Conclusion
and
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• The purpose of the “Introduction” is to create the setting for your essay, as with all of your EL Compos.
• You would like to introduce the:
• Reason why these management strategies are needed
• Give background information about the scenario
Introduction
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• Reason why these management strategies are needed
• Give background information about the scenario
Forests are very important resources as they regulate the Earth’s temperature and water cycle. They also
provide us with valuable resources like timber. Therefore it is very important to manage our forests
carefully.
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Making the link to my content in the following paragraphs.
• Reason why these management strategies are needed
• Give background information about the scenario
Forests have been exploited by Man for food and resources in the past. However, this exploitation is now
taking place at such alarming rates we are losing our forests. Therefore, it is important that we manage our
forests carefully. In this essay, I will be discussing 3 such management strategies.
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• The purpose of the “Conclusion” is to sum up your essay. This is also one of the factors that will “build an impression” on your marker.
• You can conclude by:
• Summary of methods
• Giving judgement statement / Comparison
• Establishing new insight
Conclusion
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In conclusion, there are several ways to manage our forests. They are reforestation, controlled logging and
conservation.
• Summary of methods
• Giving judgement statement / Comparison
• Establishing new insight
easy peasy, yea?
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In conclusion, I feel that reforestation is the best method out of the 3 mentioned in the essay.
This is because reforestation is a good balance between allowing logging to take place as well as ensuring that
trees are being restored as a sustainable way to manage our forests.
kinda like SS?still manageable lah!
• Summary of methods
• Giving judgement statement / Comparison
• Establishing new insight Judgement statement
Explaining my judgement briefly.
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In conclusion, I feel that there is no single best method to manage forests as each of the methods have their own pros and cons. Different methods can be more
effective in different places, so it is important to analyse the situation in a particular place before using a specific method. Sometimes, a combination of methods
could be used to maximize their benefits.
New insight;something out of the
norm
• Summary of methods
• Giving judgement statement / Comparison
• Establishing new insight
Explanation and elaboration
oh YEA!Thursday, April 26, 12
HANG IN THERE
well,
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