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Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
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Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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1. names of the various parts of a letter
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2. standard business letter formats
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3. variations in punctuation
4. typical paragraph content in a business letter
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In this lesson we look at:
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Dear Sir or Madam:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Dear Sir or Madam:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
1. Parts of a letter
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
• Return address (either YOURS or the business letterhead)
<--- Return address
April 18, 2001 <--- The date
• The date
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
<--- Recipient’s address
• Recipient’s address
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager <--- Attention Line
• Attention Line (Optional)
Dear Sir or Madam: <--- Salutation
• Salutation
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service <--- Subject LineAlthough we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
} (4 empty lines for Signature)
• Subject line (Optional) Re = “in reference to”;it’s the topic of the letter
• Body of the Letter• Complimentary Closing
Sincerely, <--- Complimentary closing
• Your name• (4 empty lines for Signature)
Marlene Friedlander <--- Your name
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company• Initials of letter writer & typist• then info about enclosures• then info about where copies
(cc) are sent
• Administrative details
Body of the Letter
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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} <-- Adminstrative Details
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Cissell Manufacturing Company
Cote des Neiges Boulevard
Montreal, PQ H2H 3T5
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
A-1 DRY CLEANING AND LAUNDRY4834 Cote des Neighes Boulevard
Montreal, Quebec H2H 3T5~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
A-1 DRY CLEANING AND LAUNDRY4834 Cote des Neighes Boulevard
Montreal, Quebec H2H 3T5~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
2. Standard Business Letter Formats (styles)>>> BLOCK STYLE• ALL parts of the letter are lined
up on the left margin.
>>> SEMI BLOCK STYLE• THREE parts of the letter are
lined up with their left edge in the center of the paper:
• return address• complimentary closing• your name
• If a letterhead look is used, it can be centered with everything else to the left.
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
Cissell Manufacturing CompanyCote des Neiges BoulevardMontreal, PQ H2H 3T5
These two styles are the most commonly used today for business letters, AND for formal personal letters.
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
Cissell Manufacturing CompanyCote des Neiges BoulevardMontreal, PQ H2H 3T5
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3. Variations in Punctuation>>> CLOSED STYLE1. ALL lines of the addresses have punctuation at the end:• COMMAs when the section is continuing on the next line• PERIODs after the last line of the section
2. The Salutation ends with a colon in Business & Formal Personal letters.
3. The Complimentary Closing ends with a comma.
>>> OPEN STYLENO lines have punctuation at the end . . .
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
Cissell Manufacturing CompanyCote des Neiges BoulevardMontreal, PQ H2H 3T53. Variations in
Punctuation>>> CLOSED STYLE1. ALL lines of the addresses have punctuation at the end:• Commas when the section is continuing on the next line• PERIODS after the last line of the section
2. The Salutation ends with a colon in Business & Formal Personal letters.
3. The Complimentary Closing ends with a comma.
>>> OPEN STYLENO lines have punctuation at the end . . .
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, ,.
Business Letter Formats & Styles
0 1 2 43Use these buttons later for lesson sections.
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
Cissell Manufacturing CompanyCote des Neiges BoulevardMontreal, PQ H2H 3T5
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,
3. Variations in Punctuation>>> CLOSED STYLE1. ALL lines of the addresses have punctuation at the end:• Commas when the section is continuing on the next line• PERIODS after the last line of the section
2. The Salutation ends with a colon in Business & Formal Personal letters.
3. The Complimentary Closing ends with a comma.
>>> OPEN STYLE
The OPEN style is much more common today in both business and personal correspondence.
NO lines are punctuated at the end . . .
• The Salutation• The Complimentary Closing
. . . except for:
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
April 18, 2001
A-1 Dry Cleaning and Laundry
16935 Devonshire Street
Victoria, BC V6J 2W9
ATTENTION: Owner or Manager
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Re: Equipment Reliability and Service
Although we manufacture and sell equipment -- the finest industrial dry cleaning equipment in North America -- we have always considered ourselves a service company. For over fifty years, customers who have purchased Cissell equipment have purchased as well the Cissell commitment to 24-hour service 365 days a year. In the last twenty-five years, no Cissell technician has failed to arrive more than four hours after being summoned.
You can find less expensive equipment. Some will work almost as well for a short period. Only Cissell, however, will work reliably over the long haul -- ultimately bringing lower costs to its purchasers.
The enclosed brochure describes in detail how Cissell and A-1 can mutually benefit from our Cissell Purchase-Service Plan.
MF:lc
Enclosure: Brochure
cc: Cissell Service Company
Sincerely,
Marlene Friedlander
Cissell Manufacturing CompanyCote des Neiges BoulevardMontreal, PQ H2H 3T54. Typical paragraph
content in the BODY of a business letter
• First ParagraphWhat you most want the reader to know. Come right to the point. This intro is NOT like an essay intro.
Of course, each business letter has its own purpose:
• Second ParagraphFill in the necessary background. Add and explain details, without unnecessary details. Stick to the facts.
• Third ParagraphNOT like an essay conclusion. Depending on your letter’s purpose, this paragraph may summarize; recommend a course of action; make a specific request; present your qualifications; etc.
•make a complaint; or answer one;•request for information;•response to sales inquiry;•job application cover letter; etc.
If you’d like to know more about the various kinds of business letters, ask in the learning centre for a reference book.
FIRST paragraph
SECOND paragraph
THIRD paragraph
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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In this lesson you have learned about:
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• variations in punctuation
• the various parts of a letter
• standard business letter formats
• typical paragraph content in a business letter
Business Letter Formats & Styles
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