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Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Year 10 Term 3 – English Language 3b Unit
Controlled Assessment #2Lesson 15
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the
marking criteria?
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Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Homework:
Set: Respond to feedback and fully prepare for your controlled assessment
week beginning 10th February 2014
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Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Good Progress: I will write a paragraph using carefully selected language and techniques
Excellent Progress: I will consider the structure of my paragraph and use language and techniques to create tension
Outstanding Progress: I will write an engaging paragraph using language, structure and techniques that creates tension
How much progress will you make today?
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary Techniques: Dramatic irony, imagery, simile, metaphor, oxymoron, rule of 3Formula Words: portrays, suggests, emphasises, represents, reflects, illustrates, highlightsKey Words: Shakespeare, tragedy, character, Verona, interpretation, Elizabethan audience
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
The BIG PictureThis term you are completing two Controlled Assessments for the English Language 3b Unit: 1. Recreation 2. Moving ImageThese are worth 10 marks each and your average accuracy mark out of 10 will make up your mark out of 30 for this section. This is 15% of your whole English Language Grade.
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Recreation CA Title Use a character from a literary text you have read as the inspiration for a piece of your own writing. Write a monologue as if you were Crooks from Of Mice and Men
Moving Image CA TitleUse a still image taken from a film as the basis of a piece of writing.
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Literary Technique Quiz...
1. Name a technique2. Define3. Provide an example4. Explain the effect5. State when it is appropriate to use
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Starter: Paired TaskDiscuss the two columns of story endings...write alternative endings for 3-6 in the red column
Ext: How do you use
punctuation and language to structure a
story?
1. They all lived happily ever after.
2. The alarm clock sounded. It was all a dream.
3. The butler did it. 4. They were together again
at last. 5. They were all dead. 6. They sailed off into the
sunset. 7. I was so glad that the evil
monster was dead.
a. “You will never defeat me!” cackled the vampire. b. Life returned to normal. Until next time. c.
d. e.
f.
g.
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Introduction: Group Task (x6)
In your groups share your paragraphs from last lesson.
Take the best bits from each and create an effective story opener and close...
Ext: Are you extending
language and using
techniques to create
tension?
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Main Task : Group Task (x6 – allocate a team leader)
Remind yourselves of the clip and then consider the 8 stills (1 and 8 are from last lesson).
Allocate each person in your group a still image (2-7) and write a paragraph creating an 8 paragraph story inspired from the film clip (using opening and close from the introduction) Work together to ensure your work flows...Remember:1. Sentence structure2. Language3. Techniques4. Punctuation
Ext: Make sure you’re not all
using the same techniques and
language
Clip
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
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Miss L. Hamilton
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation
Plenary: Peer Evaluation Task
Swap stories with another group and mark their work using the marking criteria
Provide:1. WWW2. EBI3. Mark and Band4. Highlight moments of
genius5. Correct errors Good: Exciting language and
attempts at techniques and variation in structure
Excellent: Variety of sentence length, punctuation and well chosen language to create tension
Outstanding: Impressive use of language, structure and techniques to create tension
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Good Progress: I will write a paragraph using carefully selected language and techniques
Excellent Progress: I will consider the structure of my paragraph and use language and techniques to create tension
Outstanding Progress: I will write an engaging paragraph using language, structure and techniques that creates tension
How much progress will you make today?
LQ: Am I able to contribute to a group essay that addresses the marking criteria?
Extend your thinking@ Bishop Justus 2013/2014
Literary Techniques: Dramatic irony, imagery, simile, metaphor, oxymoron, rule of 3Formula Words: portrays, suggests, emphasises, represents, reflects, illustrates, highlightsKey Words: Shakespeare, tragedy, character, Verona, interpretation, Elizabethan audience
Literary terms: onomatopoeia, adverbs, metaphor, repetition, alliteration, sibilance, powerful adjectives, simile, monosyllabic phrase, pathetic fallacy, emotive language, short sentences, structure, sensuous description, rule of three, extended vocabulary, varied punctuation