Draft 4 planning

By Debbie Marques, Maria Younes and Milka Erko

Script

Shot list Scene Shot

descriptionLocation Characters Art dept./props Costume

1 Mid shot of address

exterior / / /

2 Closeup shot of rain falling on puddle

exterior / / /

3 Establishing shot of house

Ecterior / / /

4 Mid shot of girl studying

Interior, living room

Debbie as sophie

Revision books, folders

Pyjamas

5 Closeup shot of girl reading revision book

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6 Mid shot of girl revising on sofa

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7 Closeup shot of girl’s face

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Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

8 mid shot of girl studying

Interior, living room

Debbie as Sophie

Books/ revision folders

Pyjamas

9 Mid shot of girl looking at phone

‘’ ‘’ Phone ‘’

10 Closeup shot of phone

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11 Closeup of facial expression

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12 Closeup of text ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’

13 Closeup of putting phone on table

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14 Mid shot of girl studying

‘’ ‘’ Books, revision folders

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Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

15 Over the shoulder shot of girl reading

interior, living room

Debbie as sophie

Papers, books, folders

Pyjamas

16 Closeup of phone and girl getting it

‘’ ‘’ Phone ‘’

17 Closeup of phone

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18 Mid shot of girl’s facial expression

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19 Closeup of NHS text

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20 Mid shot of girl rushing to front door

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21 Long shot of girl going to check the post

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Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

21 Closeup shot of feet ruuning

Interior, coridor Debbie as sophie

/ Pyjamas

22 Midshot of girl getting to door

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23 Low angle of bunch of letters on floor

‘’ ‘’ Letters ‘’

24 Closeup shot of NHS hospital name on letter

‘’ ‘’ NHS letter ‘’

25 Mid shot of girl kneeeling

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26 Mid shot of rain falling on puddle

Exterior / / /

27 Midshot of girl having flashback

Interior / / /

Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

28 Two shot of girl and friend

Interior, living room

Debbie as sophie and Milka as Lola

Revision book Sophie : pyjamas, robe

Lola: black jacket, black leggings and boots

29 Mid shot of friend

‘’ Milka as Lola

Handbag Black jacket black leggings and boots

30 Mid shot of girl ‘’ Debbie as sophie

Revision book Pyajamas, robe

31 Closeup shot of friend

‘’ Milka as Lola

Handbag Black jacket , black leggings and boots

32 Closeup of girl ‘’ Debbie as sophie

Revision book Pyjamas, robe

33 Point of view shot of friend

‘’ Milka as Lola

Handbag Black jacket, black leggings and boots

34 Mid shot of girl back to reality

Interior, coridor Debbie as sophie

/ Pyjamas

Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

35 Two shot of girl with boy

Interior, restaurant

Debbie as sophie and jean as danny

/ Sophie : black top, black lether jacket and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket

36 Mid shot of couple but focusing on girl

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37 Mid shot of boy trying to seduce girl (drunk)

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38 Point of view shot guy smiling while walking home

Exterior ‘’ / ‘’

39 Point of view shot of street

Exterior ‘’ / ‘’

40 Point of view shot of guy sending a kiss

Exterior ‘’ / ‘’

Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

41 Long shot of couple from behind walking home

Exterior Debbie as sophie and jean as danny

/ Sophie : black top, black lether jacket and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket

42 Mid shot of girl back to reality

Interior, corridor

Debbie as sophie

/ Pyjamas

43 Mid shot of couple arriving home

Interior , walking to bedroom

Debbie as sophie and jean as danny

/ Sophie : black top, black lether jacket and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket

Scene Shot description

Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

43 Girl’s Point of view shot of bedroom

Interior , bedroom

Debbie as sophie and jean as danny

/ Sophie : black top, black lether jacket and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket

44 Girl’s point of view shot of boy coming towards her

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45 Mid shot of couple in bed kissing

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46 Long shot of couple in bed and door shuts

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47 Mid shot of girl back to reality

Interior, corridor Debbie as sophie

/ Pyjamas

48 Closeup of girl’s hand movements on legs

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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume

49 Long shot of girl with hand on wall

Interior , corridor

Debbie as Sophie

Letters Pyjamas

50 High angle of girl crying and hand on wall

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51 Closeup shot of girl’s hand sliding down the wall

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52 Closeup shot of letter focused on ’HIV positive ‘

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Storyboard