opening sequence draft 2 part 2
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Chosen Conventions and how it developPart G
Convention Use/Develop/Challenge Description and Purpose
Examples from film with still shot
Conflict and Arguments
Use- this convention of conflict in a drama film is kind of predictable, as most drama films have arguments between characters. Develop- We will develop this convention in our opening sequence by using close ups and extreme close ups with an addition of gestures and movements of the characters.
This is the scene where Precious and her mum were fighting after Precious gets home with her new baby. This challenges the convention as it have high violence between characters.
Precious
Love Triangle Use- this convention of love triangle is rarely scene in a drama film, but in a drama-romance films are possibly have a love triangle or a challenge for the couples. Develop- we will develop this convention by using another girl, so that the girlfriend of the boy will think he’s cheating. However, there will be a twist and it was just a misunderstanding
This scene is when she told her husband that she’s seeing another guy. This uses the convention of love triangle, because it is a confession that she’s seeing another man.
Closer
Who are the Characters & who they represent Draft 1
Ramina: NevaehThe Boyfriend’s close friend
Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy, and dark
Neil: JohnThe Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his girlfriend
Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposingJeans and Hoody when going out with
other girlfriend
Ina: LilyJohn’s Fiancée
Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’s proposing to her
Jogging bottoms and Top when she saw them holding hands
Part H
Who are the Character and who they represent Draft 2
Name: Neil GuevarraAge: 17Character Name: JohnCharacter Age:
Character Clothes•Wears semi-formal clothes when he’s with Lily on their date•Wears jeans and hoody when he’s with Nevaeh in the park
John’s Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with Lily
John’s Non- Formal Outfit- When he is with Nevaeh
Part HPhone when Lily calls him The necklace that he will
be wearing throughout the film
Who are the Character and who they represent Draft 2
Name: Ina BaysonAge: 17Character Name: LilyCharacter Age:
Character Clothes•Wears semi-formal clothes when she’s with John on their date•Wears jogging bottoms, and top when she saw John and Nevaeh in the park
Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with John
Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit- When following John to the Park with Nevaeh
Part H
Phone that she will be using
The ring that John will give to her
Jewellery that she will wear ing their date
Who are the Character and who they represent Draft 2
Name: Ramina ArlauskaiteAge: 18Character Name: NevaehCharacter Age:
Character Clothes•Wears black clothes throughout the scenes Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit
- When she is standing outside the Café - When she is with John in the Park
Part H
Part H
Who are the Character and who they represent for (draft 2) opening sequence
Name: Neil GuevarraAge: 17Character Name: JohnCharacter Age:
Character Clothes• Grey and Black hoody• Black Jacket• Grey/ blue jeans• shoes Both pictures represent an
average teenager with normal clothes
Part H
Who are the Character and who they represent for (draft 2) opening sequence
Name: Ina BaysonAge: 17Character Name: InaCharacter Age:
Character Clothes• Dark blue skinny jeans• Pink hoody• Black jacket• Thick Scarf• Shoes• Pink top• Blue and red polo• Necklace • Mack up
Both pictures represent an average teenager with normal clothes
Location/Setting Draft 1
• Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is outside looking at them.
Part I
Location/Setting Draft 1
• Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh holding hands
Part I
Location/Draft 2
We are going to use the Park (Roundwood Park) for our whole Opening Sequence.
We chose this place, because we want to make the audience think that why would he be with Nevaeh in the same place, where he proposed to Lily.
This is the place where John will propose to her
This is the place where Lily would see Nevaeh and John
Part I
How are we going to create enigma
• Showing pieces of the puzzle– Not showing everything– Building suspense
• Flashes of clips– There will be a flash
forward
Part J
5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the whole film
• John and Lily got engage and move in together• Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her• They always argue on simple things• John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up, and Lily read it and
become’s suspicious • John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that
Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that him and Nevaeh are just friends
• Tries to work thing out and they’re not engage anymore
Part K
5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the opening sequence
[Shows the date and time]• John and Lily meet up in the park, because he is going to say something
important to Lily. • He proposed to her, and she was speechless, shocked, and happy.• Shoe accepted his proposal, he put the ring to her finger.
[Next day: Shows the date and time]• John was on the same park with his close friend Nevaeh, talking and
playing around (like what friends do).• Lily saw them, shocked and gets jealous, because she doesn’t know who
Nevaeh is.
Part K
• Ina (girl character) is sitting in front of the laptop looking through the internet (Facebook)
• She went to an album of pictures of her and her boyfriend (fiancée).• She became very happy seeing their pictures together and having a great time.
However all these changed when she got a message from someone who she doesn’t know
• After talking to the stranger she became curious about her boyfriend John and what is he finding from her.
• In the end, she couldn’t take the curiosity anymore and she argued with her boyfriend and broke up with him when she finds out that he have another woman.
Part K5 bullet points of what is going to
happen in the whole film for draft 2
• The girl character (Ina) will be looking through Facebook looking at her and her boyfriend/husband-to-be’s pictures.
• While looking through the last 3 pictures she will get a flashback of what happened in each of the pictures, showing what kind of memories they had together.
• After looking at the pictures she had a message from a girl who she doesn’t know.• The person started talking to her as if the stranger wants her to know something.• Ina became curious about what the information from the person will be and the
stranger told her its about her boyfriend.
Part K
5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the opening sequence for draft 2