pract crit poems
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CONTENTSPART1:INTRODUCTIONAcautionarynote/Whatwilltheexamquestionlooklike?/WhatdoIneedtoknowabouttheformatoftheexam?/WhatshouldIdofirst?/Themarkscheme/5thingsPART2:THEMEWhatisatheme?/Matchthethemeexercise/Amodelparagraph/WhatcanIdotorevise?PART3:LANGUAGEAglossaryoflanguageterminology/Acautionarynote/Keywordsinquotations/Websofconnotations/Amodelparagraph/WhatcanIdotorevise?PART4:STRUCTUREThegoldenrule/Aglossaryofstructure/amodelparagraph/WhatcanIdotorevise?PART5:TONEAdefinitionoftone/Whatarethekeyquestions?/2tonetasks/Amodelparagraph/WhatcanIdotorevise?PART6:THEPOEMS
DONTPANICDouglasAdamsTheHitchhikersGuidetotheGalaxy
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Acautionarynote:
A POEM IS NOT A
RIDDLE, IT DOESNOT HAVE TO BE
SOLVED!
Allyouneedtodoisexplainyourreactionstoit
andexplainhowitcausedthosereactions.
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Whatwilltheexamquestionlooklike?
Keyfeatures:
Thequestionisalwaysthesame!
Itisagoodideatoannotate(writenotes)uponthe
poem.
Difficultvocabularyisoftenfootnotedatthebottom.
Rememberthetitleisakeypartofthepoem.
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Thequestionalwayslookslikethis:
SECTION C
Spend about 30 minutes on this section. Think carefully
about the poem before you write your answer.
17.Writeaboutthepoemanditseffectonyou.Youmaywishtoincludesomeorallofthesepoints:thepoemscontentwhatitisabout;theideasthepoetmayhavewantedustothinkabout;themoodoratmosphereofthepoem;howitiswrittenwordsorphrasesyoufindinteresting,thewaythepoemisstructuredororganised,andsoon;yourresponsetothepoem.[10]
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WhatdoIneedtoknowabouttheformatoftheexam?
Keyfactsabouttheexamquestion:
Itisthelastsectionoftheexam.
Youwillnothaveseenthepoembefore.
Thequestionisalwaysthesame;theonly
thingthatchangeseachyearisthepoem.
Youranswerwillbeanessayofaboutaside.
Itisworth10marks(theothersectionsare
outof30).
Youhave30minutestocompletethe
question.
510minutesshouldbespentreadingand
planning,1520writingand5checking.
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Rememberyouanswershouldbewrittenin
analyticalparagraphs.MakesureyoureviseSEAL.
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Whatdoesthemarkschemelooklike?E/D
Answers
will
be
dependent
on
paraphrase,
withawarenessofmoodand
atmosphere,andsomeawarenessofsubtext,
perhaps,atD.
CCandidateswillselectandhighlightdetailinordertoprobethetext.Therewillbesome
appreciationofsomestylisticfeaturesandaclear
personalresponse.
BCandidateswilldiscussthepoemthoroughly
and
with
some
confidence.
Some
stylistic
features
willbeaddressedwithsomeinsight.
AAnswersatthislevelwillbetypifiedbyoverview,sensitivityofresponse,andappreciationofa
rangeoffeaturesandtheircontributiontothe
overallmeaning.
A*Alltheabove,inacogentandconfident
response,withanalysisandappreciationof
stylisticfeatures.
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WhatshouldIdofirst?
READ THE
POEM
CAREFULLY(twice)
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5Things
Agoodtechniquetohelpyoutogetintothe
poemistothinkaboutwhatitisactuallyabout
beforeyoustart. Thiswillgiveyousomethingto
hangyouransweron. Thebestwaytodothisis
beforeyoudoanythingelseafterreadingthe
poemistowritedown5wordswhichsumitup.
They can be connected words
or separate ones.
They can be from the poem
or from your reaction.
Thenselectthemostimportantones.
Theimportantthingisthatthisgivesyouahandleonthepoemwhichyoucanbaseyouransweron.
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MatchtheThemeExerciseTrytomatchthelistofthemestothepoemsinthebackof
thisbooklet. Trytofindaquotationforeachpairwhich
backsupyourchoice.
Isolation
Loneliness
Naturestriumph
Hope
Change
NaturereflectingLove
Theme Poem Evidence(quotation)
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AmodelSEALparagraphfortheme
One of the poems key themes is
isolation. this is an alien city. The
Persona of the poem finds the city to
be alien this suggests he/she islonely and does not fit in. This is
strange because city suggests that
there are lots of people around. The
poet seems to be exploring the idea thatyou can be isolated and alone even in
a crowd.
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WhatcanIdotorevise?Writeaparagraphaboutthethemeofanyofthepoems.
WhatcanIdotopractiseevenmore?Writeaboutthethemesoftheotherpoems.
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PART3:LanguageAGlossaryoflanguageterminologyIrony
Expressing something by usingwords that mean the opposite(humorous or sarcastic).
AnalogyComparing the likeness of twothings.
PersonificationGiving an inanimate object human
characteristics.
SimileComparing two objects as they havesomething in common (e.g. as whiteas snow).
AlliterationRepetition of a consonant in aphrase (e.g. Harry had a hole in hishard hat).
Assonance Repetition of vowel sound (e.g. cold,told, bold).
Parataxis Use of very short, sharp sentences.
Metaphor Comparisons which don't use "like"or "as", but say that something "is"something else because it is similar.
Imagery
Using language to convey an
atmosphere.
OnomatopoeiaWhen spoken, a word which soundsthe same as its meaning (e.g. "hiss"- a snake).
HyperboleExaggerating something so muchthat it cannot be taken literally.
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Acautionarynote:
WHEN WE TALK
ABOUT COMMENTING
ON LANGUAGE WE
MEAN COMMENTINGON ITS EFFECT ON
THE READER.
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Websofconnotations.
Thisexampleshowsas
ofconnotations(rela
wordsandideas)forthe
wordicebergs.
et
ted
Drawtwomorewordwebsfortheseotherquotationsfrom
thepoems.
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AmodelSEALparagraph
Language is used in a dramatic
and unsettling way with the line:
At every desk a still child stared at
me
The phrase still child seems strangeas we would expect children in a school
to be full of life and energy. The fact
they are staring at the narrator as if
they are inspecting him/her makes
them sound quite hostile. They seem
to be very strange, ghostly and
unsettling children.
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WhatcanIdotorevise?[partI]:Learnthetechnicalvocabulary:Look/Cover/Write/Check.
YOUWILLGAINMOREMARKSIFYOUUSETHETECHNICALVOCABULARY!
WhatcanIdotorevise?[part2]Writeaparagraphforanyoftheother
quotationsdescribingtheeffectsofthe
languageonthereader. Compareittothe
modelparagraph.
WhatcanIdotopractiseevenfurther?Beingabletocommentonlanguageisthekey
skillinEnglish,youshouldpracticethisover
andoveragainwiththepoemsatthebackof
thisbooklet.
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PART4:Structure:TheGoldenrule:
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AglossaryofstructureterminologyEnjambment
Continuing a sentence beyond
the end of a line, couplet, orstanza.
AssonanceThe same / similar sound usedin syllables of words near eachother.
Ballad Ancient poem telling a story.
CoupletA pair of lines of verse usuallythe same length.
Octet / OctaveFirst 8 lines in a sonnet.
Pentameter A line of 10 syllables.
QuatrainA stanza / group of 4 lines
usually with alternate rhymes.Sonnet A 14-line poem.
StanzaFour or more rhymed linesrepeated as a unit.
Verse A group of lines in a poem.
Thekeyquestions:Isthestructureregularorirregular?Howdoesthisfitinwithwhatthepoemisabout?
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Amodelparagraphonstructure
The structure of the poem is regular.
There are six stanzas with each one
being made up of three lines. The first
and third line of each stanza rhyme.This regular structure suggests two
things. Firstly, it seems to reflect the
shopkeepers straight forward, black
and white view of the world. Secondly,it creates a sense of straight forward
honesty on the part of the narrator who
seems aware of the things that sadly
the shopkeeper has missed.
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WhatcanIdotorevise?[part1]
Learnthestructureterminology:Look/Cover/Write/Check.
WhatcanIdotorevise[part2]Practicewritingaparagraphonstructureforoneormoreofthepoemsinthebackofthisbooklet. Haveinmindthethemeofthepoemsbeforeyoudothisasthiswillgiveyoucluesastowhythepoethasstructuredthepoeminthisway.
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PART5:ToneAdefinitionoftone.
Whenwesaytonewemeantheemotionsexpressedandexploredinthepoem.
Whatarethekeyquestions?Whatisthetoneofthepoem?
Doesthetonechange?
Wheredoesitchange?
Whatdoesitchangeto?
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Task1:Identifythetoneofanyofthepoems.
Task2:identifyoneofthepoemswherethetonechanges
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Amodeltoneparagraph
The tone of the poem remainsconstant. It seems to be hopeful
Sometimes a man aims high and all
goes well.Although it is quiet sad as it
acknowledges bad things can happen
it seems positive that it does not have
to be that way. It is as if it is sayingwe should be positive despite the
possibility that things can, and often
do, go wrong. It could almost bedescribes as a poem about desperately
clinging on to hope.
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WhatcanIdotorevise?[part1]Writeyourowntoneparagraphaboutoneofthepoems.Thencompareittothemodelparagraph.
WhatcanIdotorevise?[part2]Tryandidentifythetone,andanychangesinit,oftheremainingpoems.
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PART6:
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