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Talking about taxes in plain language
A few considerations on principles for changes and evaluation
procedures
Karsten PedersenRoskilde University, Denmark
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Case: Danish tax authorities
• Rewriting thousands of letters
• Evaluating the rewrites
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Rewriting principles
• Shortening of sentences
• Simplifying sentence constructions
• Reversing (redesigning) content structure
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Organisation
• Central language unit– Various educational backgrounds
• Decentralised language anchors or satellites
• Approvement procedure for larger mailings– 1000 and more
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Internal evaluation
• What do the colleagues think of the new letters– ’They work, please let’s keep the old
ones!’
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External evaluation 1
• Quantitative evaluation of effect– E.g. telephonic reactions after letter
• Power relations may change with plain language
– Qualitative evaluation of understanding• Contrastive tests
– Mixed evaluation procedures
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External evaluation 2
• No evaluation based on letter practices in the receiver group– Student project giving interesting
indications• No-readers=effort wasted?• At least we need to review the options
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Preliminary conclusions, further prospects
• It is not always a language problem
• Plain language cannot solve the no-reader problem
• Plain language can give more questions than before
• We need to find out how to anchor the project in the organisation
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Thanks for listening
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