write autobiographies

Upload: drsodagam-santosh-kumar

Post on 06-Apr-2018

228 views

Category:

Documents


0 download

TRANSCRIPT

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    1/19

    Autobiography

    Have you ever undergone any such life experience which you wanted to document? Have

    you anytime wished to write about the significant moments of your life and create an

    interestingAutobiography?

    What is an Autobiography?

    + + =

    Self life something written = Something written about selfs life

    An autobiography is write-up which includes story of self for private as well as

    publication.

    In simple words, if biography means writing the story of another person,

    autobiography means writing about ones own life experience.

    A beautiful sunny morning, birds chirping happily and trees swaying gently like

    dancing to the tune of the gentle wind. Jane was in midst of this beautiful scene and

    suddenly felt an urge to write about her experience, capture it at that very moment.

    Auto bio graphy Autobiography

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    2/19

    Imagining it may be equally agreeable to you to

    know the circumstances of my life, many of which

    you are yet unacquainted with, and expecting the

    enjoyment of a week's uninterrupted leisure in my

    present country retirement, I sit down to write them

    for you.

    Look at the below example:

    The above example is an excerpt from the autobiography written byBenjamin Franklin

    for his son. This autobiography written by him works as a beacon light and guides his son

    in all matters of importance.

    Importance and benefit of writing autobiographies:

    Contains complete account of the life of the person writing it.

    Serves as guidance for some people.

    Example: Benjamin Franklins autobiography was written to guide his son.

    Helps in deriving inspiration.

    Helps in knowing about the hidden facts or incidents of a persons life; sometimes

    even includes hidden emotions and opinions about other people.

    From historical perspective, it helps in knowing how a person felt or reacted

    towards certain important political issues while dealing with them.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    3/19

    From social perspective, it helps in establishing link between the social conditions

    existing during any period of time and how people reacted towards them.

    From political perspective, it helps in knowing about different political scenarios

    the autobiographer went through and what were his reflections towards it.

    From literature point of view, autobiographies are considered as great treasures.

    Characteristics of Autobiography:

    Should contain an account of a person's entire life, or it may focus on one aspect

    of that life, such as an important event or a childhood experience. Such a work is

    called memoir.

    Good autobiography should be a collection of memoirs. It can also be inspired

    from diaries.

    Should include the opinion of person on important issues of his / her time.

    Should include all the important and relevant events of his / her life.

    Should maintain the authenticity of facts and should not be fictional in any part.

    Should contain apt, short, and interesting account of events of life to avoid readers

    from getting bored.

    Always written in first person point of view.

    Types of Autobiography:

    1. Full Autobiography covers entire life of the person from birth until present time.

    Example: Elia Kazan's A Life

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    4/19

    2. Memoir includes life experience related to particular period of time.

    Example: Willie Morris' New York Days

    3. Religious Autobiography used for the purpose of religious founding and

    also works for promoting a particular faith.

    Example: The Bible

    4.New Spiritual Autobiography includes selfs spiritual journey.

    5. Conceptual Autobiography innovation of twentieth century, where the

    autobiographer goes out somewhere deliberately or

    passes himself / herself through unusual situations to

    return and write about his/ her experience.

    Example:George Orwells Down and Out in Paris and London

    Quiz:

    Why should we write autobiographies?

    A. To hand down as ancestral property

    B. To make people know about our life events and experience

    C. To show off our greatness

    D. To become familiar

    Characteristics of autobiography includes__________________.

    A. opinion of person on all important matters of his / her time

    B. important events of his / her life

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    5/19

    C. real facts

    D. All of the above

    Conceptual Autobiography is a new concept where in __________________.

    A. Writer will deliberately undergo unusual experience and then write his experience.

    B. Writer will read others books and write by taking ideas

    C. Writer will include all his friends views on a topic.

    D. None of the above.

    Complete life incidents from birth to death help in writing a ________________.

    A. Spiritual Biography

    B. Memoir

    C. Full Autobiography

    D. Religious Autobiography

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    6/19

    How to write Autobiographies?

    Every individual at least once in life undergoes this urge of writing all his life details so

    that his children, grand children, his close relatives, and associates will read and know

    what he did, achieved and how he felt in his life.

    After deciding to write an autobiography, one needs to follow certain stages of writing to

    come up with an interesting and informative autobiography. Those stages are

    a) Prewriting

    b) Drafting

    c) Revising, Editing, and Proofreading.

    Prewriting:

    Prewriting is the first stage of writing an autobiography. This stage helps in seeking and finding

    all the relevant information required for writing an autobiography. Though an autobiography is

    a story of self, one should undergo different steps of prewriting stage to come up with relevant

    details that are need for coming up with an interesting and good autobiography.

    Let us have a detailed look at the various steps to be followed in prewriting stage:

    1. Reading other autobiographies: This activity though sounds weird actually helps in

    establishing an insight about autobiographies. This will help in getting a feel about good

    autobiographies. The more one reads others autobiographies, the more ideas could be

    gathered on approach and organizing of selfs autobiography. One should however always

    bear in mind not to copy works of others.

    Examples:

    The History place Short autobiography by Abraham Lincoln

    Mein Kampf by Adolf Hitler

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    7/19

    2. Choosing your Purpose: Establishing the purpose of writing an autobiography is very

    essential as it helps in writing aptly. One must decide if he / she is writing it for personal

    use or publication purpose. If it is for publication purpose, one cannot become famous until

    the autobiography contains something special to attract readers.

    3. Thinking about audience: It is very essential to determine the audience as it changes the

    way the autobiography is presented.

    written purely for self may contain any details, short cuts

    written for family and relatives should contain chosen details in lucidlanguage

    written for publication ought to have a thorough approach and all thecharacters should be well introduced and incidents well written

    4. Choosing a theme: Another important step in prewriting is developing the theme of the

    autobiography. If there is no theme, then the autobiography would look like events

    mentioned according to time line in history book.

    5. Brainstorming and free writing: Brain storming activity helps in remembering all the

    important events of life. One may note down all that one remembers about self in points to

    work and develop them further.

    Examples of themes:

    Story of struggle and success

    Rags to riches

    Express someones undying love for oneself and vice versa

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    8/19

    Free writing helps in jotting down everything that one remembers about one self

    irrespective of spelling and grammar aspects. It helps in providing rich information though

    everything need not be included.

    6. Clustering: One can also try to gather information about self by making cluster webs

    which is very convenient and helps in establishing link between incidents or people.

    Examples:

    Ten best moments of life

    Five worst moments

    Life purpose, moments filled with emotions and others

    I went to Amsterdam in the year 1986, which happened to be the best of my

    life experience. On the first day of my visit, I felt the place was outstanding. I

    could sense the freshness in air which was not present in my own home town

    which smelled like oil all the time with the amount of pollution in the air..

    Name

    Personal

    details

    FamilyImportant

    events

    Adolescent

    Parents

    Birth detailsCompetitions attended

    School

    Graduation

    Wedding

    Hair color,eye color etc

    Childhooddays

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    9/19

    7. Research: The next important step that needs to be followed after clustering is research.

    One has to do research about one self by conducting interviews of friends and family. One

    can also try to find details through photos, letter and such other memorabilia. One can also

    gather information about the important events that took place during ones life time and

    also record ones reflection about them.

    8. Thesis: Thesis gives an idea about what one can expect from the autobiography. The theme

    can be mentioned in the thesis to help the reader identify the purpose of writing an

    autobiography.

    9. Preparing for first draft: After going through various steps of prewriting, the final step is

    to prepare for first draft. One has to decide the chronological orderinto which the facts and

    details must be presented.

    Close

    relatives

    SiblingsPromotionsEmployment

    Adult life

    Personal facts like birth details, place and other facts

    About family

    About education

    About personal reflections on important political, social issues

    About ones choice in life and others

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    10/19

    Drafting

    Drafting is a very important stage of writing, as in this stage we put together all the

    information gathered in set order to come up with a good autobiography. It is very

    essential for one to do the drafting work with much care as it is in this stage of writing

    that a person will actually start talking about himself. Care must however be taken

    that the important part is to develop ideas rather than rushing to complete the final

    copy.

    Steps for drafting Autobiography:

    Every autobiography similar to essay and biography of famous person includes

    introductory paragraph with thesis statement, body which contains several paragraphs

    and a concluding paragraph.

    Introductory paragraph:

    The introduction gives the reader an idea about what and whom he is going to

    read about. Hence, similar to biography, the autobiography should also start

    with a hook line to grab the attention of the reader.

    Never start the autobiography with the routine introduction with birth details.

    It is always good to start with some interesting life incident first and then go

    back to birth details.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    11/19

    One may also try to come up with an introduction where one is talking about

    the place one is born in or the region, culture to which ones parents belong.

    Example:

    After introducing oneself to the audience, one must now frame a thesis which

    must contain information about ones purpose of writing autobiography and other

    details in one sentence.

    Body Paragraphs:

    Body paragraphs must contain birth time and place, likes and dislikes,

    overall personality, important events of life which would make the

    autobiography a very interesting tale to read.

    If in confusion on where to start with, one may try to divide the life

    experiences into different time lines.

    Under the heading of My Childhood one may focus on points such as

    family, early childhood memories, adolescent life, school days.

    No: I was born on January 5th, 1987, in Los Angeles, America. I am 23 yearsold, working as a manager in local stores.

    Yes: It was a rainy night and I was walking alone on the road, when Isuddenly happened to hear someone shout behind me, my name. I turnedaround fearing who he was. It was none other than my childhood friend

    Samuel. I was surprised to see him after ages. He took me down into my

    memory lane and reminded me of the time we spent together. He was hardlyone day elder to me, was born on 4th and I was born on 5th January, 1987, so wealways celebrated our birthdays together..

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    12/19

    Include details such as language spoken, holidays celebrated and others

    under heading My culture.

    Include ones experiences with various people and at various places, current

    occupation and many such details under the heading My present life.

    Transition words and phrases should be used to maintain flow of the

    thoughts from one paragraph to another in autobiography.

    Should never include exaggerated incidents.

    Conclusion:

    Conclude autobiography talking about the current experience or incident

    highlighting current life.

    Should summarize main points and create an impression in readers mind

    about self.

    One may also end the autobiography by stating about future aspirations and

    dreams.

    Examples of points to be included:

    interesting facts about the region one is born

    the most interesting childhood event

    specific food items one prefers to have on certain days of the month or year

    and many other such details

    Example:

    One day, I will reach that point where I would be able to have my own chain

    of stores throughout America..

    That day is very near when I, with my hard work and dedication, will serve

    millions of Americans and my companys name will be heard in everyhousehold.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    13/19

    Points to remember:

    Maintain time line and recall incidents from birth time till present day in

    Chronological order. Sometimes to make the write up interesting the

    autobiography may be started speaking about specific event and then move

    on to the time of birth.

    Always write from first person point of view.

    Include action verbs and adjectives to describe self and other characters in

    the autobiography.

    Follow organized pattern of drafting an autobiography.

    All the autobiographies must be written in narrative form to create a

    fiction like story.

    Include details about people, places and historical facts which hold

    importance and add weight to the events.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    14/19

    Revising, Editing, and proofreading

    To err is Human. Therefore, it is very common that we do make mistakes in

    our written works too. The essential part is to check timely and eliminate the mistakes

    before sharing our work with others. An autobiography should be famous for its

    narration and style but not for the number of errors committed in writing it. Hence, care

    must be taken to avoid making errors and if any are present then they must be timely

    rectified.

    The next important stage in the process of writing an autobiography after drafting is

    revising, editing and proofreading the written autobiography.

    Steps for revising, editing and proofreading the autobiography:

    Revising: In the process of revising, the style of writing an autobiography is

    checked. It also helps in arranging the matter in proper order following an

    organized pattern.

    Remove sentences which are wordy and present an unclear idea.

    Avoid repetition of thoughts and same sentences.

    Remove unnecessary facts and details.

    Write good and strong sentences in introduction and conclusion.

    Arrange the sentences and paragraphs in best possible order.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    15/19

    It was a rainy night and I was walking alone on the road, when I suddenly

    happened to hear someone shout behind me my name. I turned around

    wondering who he was. It was none other than my childhood friend, Samuel.Surprised to see him after ages. He took me down into my memory lane

    and reminded me of the time we spent together. He was one day elder to me,

    was born on 4th and I was born on 5th January, 1987. So we always

    celebrated our birthdays together. He used to be so thin but now is well built,

    five feet ten inches tall and handsome. It is not that I am any less. I am bittaller than him at five feet eleven inches with muscles. As we were born

    just with a day difference, we always used to spend time and celebrate

    together. After all, I have worked hard and spent hours together in the gymto get such a perfect six abs physique. I invited him to my home but as it was

    too late he promised me that he would visit me the coming Sunday The

    whole week went away in reminiscing old memories. It was a movie kind

    experience minus the black and white stuff because we were born in the

    colorful era. I was all geared up to meet him and nostalgia filled my being. I

    was remembering the day we met each other for the first time when the door

    bell rang.

    Fragment - Add subjectI to the sentence.

    Repetition of thought

    Unnecessary sentence

    Unclear idea

    (Whole sentence)

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    16/19

    Editing and Proofreading: Once done with the hammering out of the

    story, the work must now be left on the editing table. In this step, the

    written work is thoroughly checked to remove any extra details, tie up

    lose ends and finally to make the autobiography crisp and readable.

    Rewrite sentences which interrupt the flow of the write up.

    Check the spellings of the words used and rectify them if any error.

    Remove repeated words, run on sentences and other grammatical errors such as

    comma splice and so on.

    Follow basic standards of punctuation, mechanics, spelling, grammar, and

    usage.

    It was a rainy night and I was walking alone on the road, when Isuddenly happened to hear someone shout behind me my name. I turned

    around around wondering who he was. It was none other than my

    childhood friend, Samuel. I wassurprised to see him afterages, he tookme down into my memory lane and reminded me of the time we spent

    together. He was one day elder to me, was born on 4th and I was born on

    5th January, 1987. So us always celebrated our birthdays together. Heused to be so thin but now is well built, five feet ten inches tall and

    handsome. It is not that I am any less. I am bit taller than him at five feet

    eleven inches with muscels. After all, I have worked hard and spenthours together in the gym to get such a perfect six abs physique. I invitedhim to my home, but as it was too late he promised me that he would

    visit me the coming Sunday the whole week went away in

    reminiscing old memories. I was all geared up to meet him and

    nostalgia filled my being. I were remembering the day we met each other

    for the first time when the door bell rang.

    Repeated

    wordPronoun usage

    Replace it with we

    Comma splice

    Use Semicolon

    Spelling ErrorMuscles

    Subject Verb agreement error

    Were to be replaced by Was Run on

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    17/19

    Quiz:

    1. Choosing the purpose of writing autobiography and thinking about

    audience are steps of _________________

    A. Drafting

    B. Prewriting

    C. Editing

    D. Revising

    2. Drafting process includes ________________.

    A. Summary of points written in the paragraphs.

    B. Life history of friends

    C. Current life experiences, job details, and other such details.

    D. None of the above

    3. To check the errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation and others is

    essential for coming up with authentic autobiography

    A. True

    B. False

    4. One must maintain chronological order and write from

    _____________________ in autobiography.

    A. Third person point of view

    B. Omniscient point of view

    C. No specific point of view

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    18/19

    D. First person point of view

    5. Your self story may be a medium through which you may try to tell others

    what kind of person you are, what were the interesting events in your life and

    predominantly help you in striking good rapport with your children and grand

    children by letting them know how you had same interests as them at the same

    age and other such things.

    Answer the following questions and then create a short Autobiography of

    yourself:

    1. What is your name?

    2. When were you born and at what place?

    3. Where do you currently live?

    4. Who are your parents and to which region do they belong?

    5. Has region, culture, language and other such things affect you?

    6. Which exceptional qualities make you special?

    7. Why did you move out of your place of birth if you did?

    8. Include few words on your future plans, aspirations and what are you doing

    now to achieve them.

  • 8/3/2019 Write Autobiographies

    19/19