dream job
DESCRIPTION
First assignment in Texas Tech's high school Speech class.TRANSCRIPT
MY FIRST SPEECH
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MY PROFESSIONAL DREAM
A 2- to 3-minute talk
GREET:
Good morning. Welcome to Pio XII.
GREET:
Good morning and welcome to Texas Tech High School at Pio XII.
GREET:
Good afternoon and welcome to my Speech class at Texas Tech High School (at Pio XII).
GREET:
Good afternoon and welcome to Miss B.’s Speech class at Texas Tech High School (at Pio XII).
INTRODUCE YOURSELF:
My name is Sue/ I’m Sue. I’m a freshman and am ___years old.
EXPRESS your PROFESSIONAL CHOICE
STATE OBJECTIVE:The objective of my presentation today is…
The aim / purpose of my presentation / talk / speech today is….
OR What I’m going to talk about today is… /It’s my pleasure to be here with you today to
tell you about…
• My Professional Dream• My Dream Job• My Future Career
• What I Plan to Be When I Grow Up
I hope / plan / expect / intend to take 2 or 3 / a few minutes / a couple of / minutes…
TIMING
PREVIEW YOUR MAIN POINTS (3)
OUTLINE STRUCTURE:
1. ASPECTS OF THE JOB
3 Supporting Ideas / Facts
Your Characteristics3 Supporting Ideas / Facts
Things You Must Do in the Next 10 Years to Reach Goal
3 Supporting Ideas / Facts
CONCLUSION (3 points)1. SIGNAL END
That brings me to the end of my presentation / speech / talk…
2. Restate Choice
That brings me to the end of my PROFESSIONAL DREAM / DREAM JOB /
FUTURE CAREER presentation / speech / talk about being / becoming a film director.
3. SUMMARIZE MAIN POINTSTo sum up / In summary / To recap / Overall… / To recapitulate… / All this boils down to…/ Generally speaking…/ On the whole…/ In any event…
REFER TO THE INTRODUCTION & CONCLUDE IN A PERSUASIVE & INSIGHTFUL WAY:
• In conclusion, I’d like• Given these points…• In the final analysis…• All things considered…• In essence…
• In brief / In short • In a nutshell• As has been noted…• To conclude it’s worth
saying…
• Although the future is uncertain…• Even though my story is still in the making…
• Despite my age…• As my father says…
• Tomorrow is yet another day.• Life presents many opportunities…
A FEW TIPS
Support your points with:
Definitions
Examples
Comparisons or Contrasts
Anecdotes and Other Narratives
Testimonies by Authorities
Statistics
Stay away from adjectives (excellent, efficient, modern etc.)
USE verbs and/or nouns
Miss B. / Colegio Franscicano Pio XII, Sao Paulo, Brazil