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Duana Glenn Alesia Patterson ECED 4300 B Dr. Tonja Root Fall 2008 5 th Grade Limericks. Duana Glenn Prewriting. ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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Duana GlennAlesia Patterson

ECED 4300 BDr. Tonja Root

Fall 20085th Grade Limericks

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Duana GlennPrewriting

ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student

a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.

PLO: A. The students will complete their own graphic organizer.

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Form of Writing for Limericks

5 Line poem 1 couplet (2) 1 triplet (3) Rhyme pattern: A, A, B, B, A Limericks are meant to be funny or have a

punch line at the end!

N.A. (2004, October 3). Limericks. Retrieved November 10, 2008, from Limericks Web site: http://volweb.utk.edu/school/bedford/harrisms/limerick.h

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Prewriting Stage of Limericks

Choose a topic. Consider purpose, form,

and audience. Generate and organize

ideas for writing.

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Prewriting Stage of LimericksChoosing a topic

Choose topics that interest you.

Keep topics general, so that students can narrow them to what interest them.

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Prewriting Stage of Limericks Considering Purpose

What’s your purpose? Entertain? Inform? Persuade?

Purpose influences other ideas of writing.

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Prewriting Stage of Limericks Considering Form

What type of writing will it be? Story? Letter? Poem? Report?

Important to consider form, in order to develop structure.

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Prewriting Stage of Limericks Considering Audience

Students’ writing is influenced by their audience.

Students adapt writing to fit their audience.

“The manner in which the writer expresses a relationship with the reader in respect to the writer’s understanding.” (Tompkins, pg.86)

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Prewriting Stage of Limericks

Generate and Organize ideas for Writing

Students engage in “rehearsal” activities such as reading books, taking field trips, viewing videos, etc.

Young children use drawing to gather and organize ideas for writing.

Older students prepare for writing by making graphic organizers.

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Graphic Organizer

Graphic Organizer

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Published ModelAnd was it all worth it? You bet.

One thing isn't clear even yet,Some day, down the line,With this new job of mine

Will I ever crawl out from this debt?

Ramirez, J. 2007-2008. Her-be-limerick-poems. Retrieved November 10, 2008, from College Graduation Poems Website: http://www.liu.edu/cwis/cwp/library/workshop/citapa.htm

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Practice Activity

Class collaboration. We will use the

shared pen technique.

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Assessment Activity

YOUR TURN!!!Students will be given

their own graphic organizer to complete

as modeled.

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Alesia Patterson

Stage of writing: Drafting GPS: ELA5W4 The student consistently uses

a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student

a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.

PLO: The students will create a Limerick poem.

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Limerick

Uses both rhyme and rhythm. Rhyme pattern: A,A,B,B,A Consist of five lines; 1st, 2nd, 5th lines

rhyme and 3rd and 4th rhyme with each other and are shorter than the other three.

The last line often contains a funny or surprising ending.

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Drafting

This is when you take your ideas from the prewriting stage and put them in the form of a poem.

Use your graphic organizer to help organize your thoughts.

Drafting is messy. Main focus is getting your thoughts down

and content of your writing on paper. Do not worry about grammar and spelling

mistakes.

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Example of a Limerick

Sue There once was a girl named Sue,

She visited the city zooShe smelled funky,

And looked like a monkeySo now she lives there too!!

By Lindsay K. Dutton

Poetry Contest and Poems . Retrieved November 9, 2008, from Limerick Poems Web site: http://www.poetryamerica.com/limerick-poems.asp

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Example of a Limerick

Sue There once was a girl named Sue,

She visited the city zooShe smelled funky,

And looked like a monkeySo now she lives there too!!

By Lindsay K. Dutton

Poetry Contest and Poems . Retrieved November 9, 2008, from Limerick Poems Web site: http://www.poetryamerica.com/limerick-poems.asp

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Explanation

Lines: 1, 2, and 5 rhyme and rhythm

1.There once was a girl named Sue,

2.She visited the city zoo, 5. Now she live there too!!

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Explanation con’t

•Lines 3 and 4 rhyme and rhythm3.She smelled funky, 4.And looked like a monkey

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Explanation con’t

•Last line contains funny or surprising ending 5.So now she lives there too!!

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Practice Activity

Topic: Graduation. Using your graphic organizer start

putting your thoughts on paper. Lines 1,2, and 5 have to rhyme. Lines 3 and 4 have to rhyme.

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Assessment

Create a draft Limerick of your own. 5 line poem. Remember that the 1,2,5 lines rhyme. The 3 and 4 lines rhyme. Do not worry about spelling and other

grammar mistakes. Focus on content.

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References http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=

drafting+stage+while+writing+poetry+&aq=f&oq

http://www.poetryamerica.com/limerick-poems.asp

Tompkins, G (2009). Language Arts; Patterns of Practice. Upper Saddle River, New Jersey: Pearson Education, Inc.

N.A.) (2004, October 3). Limericks. Retrieved November 10, 2008, from Limericks Web site: http://volweb.utk.edu/school/bedford/harrisms/limerick.htm